A Handsome Wallet and Swanky Ride
Rewards and just rewards ...5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This sonnet, A Handsome Wallet and Swanky Ride, has the look of the Bard's favorite format, and the theme and tone of a Hitchcock episode. She'll have the time of her life...come to an end. Freaky deaky.
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This sonnet, A Handsome Wallet and Swanky Ride, has the look of the Bard's favorite format, and the theme and tone of a Hitchcock episode. She'll have the time of her life...come to an end. Freaky deaky.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
Comment from K. R. Ward
Absolutely sinister! It's every girls worst nightmare. Whether we're gold-digging or not. I really like the font you used, I still don't know how to make mine look cool.
Great job,
Best of luck!
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Absolutely sinister! It's every girls worst nightmare. Whether we're gold-digging or not. I really like the font you used, I still don't know how to make mine look cool.
Great job,
Best of luck!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
Comment from Galactia
Hi
Excellent written Shakespearean sonnet you have composed for the sinister sonnet contest. it is written in perfect iambic Pentameter. Perfect rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gg.
Regards
Tia
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Hi
Excellent written Shakespearean sonnet you have composed for the sinister sonnet contest. it is written in perfect iambic Pentameter. Perfect rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gg.
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
Comment from beizanten
a pretty good and well-written opening paragraph. A good and intriguing second stanza. A great, well written and interesting third stanza. A pretty great ending. You have done great, keep up the great work!
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a pretty good and well-written opening paragraph. A good and intriguing second stanza. A great, well written and interesting third stanza. A pretty great ending. You have done great, keep up the great work!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
Comment from tfawcus
A sonnet that is metrically sound, with a satisfying turn (of the knife) in the third stanza! A sharp warning to all those gold-diggers out here. Those that have a lot of money generally know how to hang on to it!
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A sonnet that is metrically sound, with a satisfying turn (of the knife) in the third stanza! A sharp warning to all those gold-diggers out here. Those that have a lot of money generally know how to hang on to it!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
