Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Hi Roxanna,
Wow! You sure have this tale firmly in your grasp now.
I am so glad to see the confidence you are writing with and how well this chapter unfolds.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019

Thanks for taking the time to catch up. Appreciate the reviews. Rox

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Beautifully written Rox, you are good at these, I think you're a fine author, and an imaginitve author. This story would would rank in my favourite writing genres of all time. I'm enjoying it immensely, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Before my (absents)...absence? 2: Lucas (starred) out the opening. Stared? 3: She wonder(ed) why she needed...

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018

Thank you so muich Roy for the wonderful review and helps. I thought I had fixed the one, but didn't see the others. Thank you you honor me with your words and the 6 stars. Rox

reply by royowen on 18-Nov-2018

Well done, well earned

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Aww, Rox, you keep us waiting for so long to read the next chapters. You are cruel. lol. I don't think I'd like to be married to that creep, Lucas, either. What if she has a daughter??? I'm so pleased Joshua and Lyse are married, I agree with her, why wait? Now for the fight of the century. I hope our guys and dragons are ready for the fight of their lives, because that's what I think it will be. I'm sorry I don't have a 6 left. :(

I want to tell you how much I admire your book, your talent is incredible, and I hope you send this around the publishers because I think it would also make a fantastic movie. Game of Thrones come to mind when I read this, although very different. I will be the first in line to buy this book :)) Sandra xxxx

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018

Thank you so much Sandra. Don't know that I will try to publish, but we will see what happens. I'm so glad you enjoy it and would be the first in line to buy.=} Rox

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A very vivid write that is fantastical and colorful with good dialogue and dragons. I applaud your detailed imagination. I would mention a few items,

Lucas (stared) out the opening
But toying with her emotion(s) gave him...

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018

Thank you so much and for the helps as well. I'm always messing up 'stare' and forgetting my 's'. =}

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Wow! That was some wedding. The imagery was very good especially the Brides attire and the feast. The plans are all in place and we will soon have the battle. I fear for the wife of Lucas if she should have a girl child. I hope the battle comes before the birth of her child to save her from her evil husband. Well done, Nancy:)

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018

Thanks so much Nancy. Rox

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

This is another exciting battle adventure between good and evil made more exciting with dragons carrying soldiers in the battle itself. the story becomes more intense with the love angle between main protagonist and the antagonist. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018

Thanks for the great review. =] Rox