Comment from Ogden

Exceptional

Congratulations on your most sensitive senyru, "Generations," recognizing the venerable culture of native Americans.

It deserves commendation.

Ogden (Call me Don)

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, Don. I am grateful for your review and comments. I have Native Americans in my ancestry and can remember learning oral history this way. All the best!!

reply by Ogden on 08-Nov-2018

You're very welcome.
(I hate when that happens. Don't you?)
Don

reply by Ogden on 10-Nov-2018

Please excuse my last reply. I just noticed it was intended for someone else, for whom it actually made sense.
Don

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

This is a good Senryu because it raises so many vital issues. You present life as it should be. The way that it has always been. I love your photo. It adds an element of wisdom to your words. We are becoming a world that puts old ones in nursing homes because they have lost their usefulness. They are too much trouble. And we put little ones in day care because they interfere with career plans. Times change. It's hard to care for young and old and stay financially sound. There is a lot of wisdom in your words though. Nothing matters more than family.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018

Thank you, Debbie. I really appreciate your comments and review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Very nicely done senryu. Wish we had more connections between different generations and wish everyone was willing to listen and learn from each other.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018

Thanks so much for the great review.

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018

Thanks so much for the great review.