Magical music
It can work wonders11 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
I have no singing voice and I couldn't carry a tune on an musical instrument if my life depended on it. But music has been uplifting for me, it has been therapy and it has been a friend that brings back pleasant memories. I think your senryu is quite nice. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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I have no singing voice and I couldn't carry a tune on an musical instrument if my life depended on it. But music has been uplifting for me, it has been therapy and it has been a friend that brings back pleasant memories. I think your senryu is quite nice. Best wishes.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Many thanks Victor
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You are most welcome.
Comment from nancyjam
So true. Music can work wonders and there
are so many kinds to choose from depending
on our mood and what we need fro it.
Nice Senryu.
Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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So true. Music can work wonders and there
are so many kinds to choose from depending
on our mood and what we need fro it.
Nice Senryu.
Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written senryu about the magic of music that can change our mood from the first note until the last sounds fade away. Without music the days are long and boring.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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A very well-written senryu about the magic of music that can change our mood from the first note until the last sounds fade away. Without music the days are long and boring.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Mant thanks Sandra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree and music can sooth away our sorrows and your poem brought the sounds and images that music can create, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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I so agree and music can sooth away our sorrows and your poem brought the sounds and images that music can create, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Many thanks Dolly. X
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Many thanks Dolly. X
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Many thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent entry about music. I feel the same way. Your short verse amplified the emotions that we all feel when listening to good music. Good luck on this Senry prompt contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Excellent entry about music. I feel the same way. Your short verse amplified the emotions that we all feel when listening to good music. Good luck on this Senry prompt contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from DonandVicki
It's true, music is good for the soul. The cute art work complements your 5-7-5.This truly is a good contender for the contest and I wish you luck.
Don and Vicki,
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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It's true, music is good for the soul. The cute art work complements your 5-7-5.This truly is a good contender for the contest and I wish you luck.
Don and Vicki,
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 senryu and entry for the contest
I agree, music is like magic
Amazing how simple notes can effect us
Great art work to match
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 senryu and entry for the contest
I agree, music is like magic
Amazing how simple notes can effect us
Great art work to match
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Many thanks for the great review
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the idea of music
being magic; it can do
many things for our spirit.
-You describe that well in your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the idea of music
being magic; it can do
many things for our spirit.
-You describe that well in your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Many thanks for the great review
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Lady Jane
great senryu, writer. The syllabic count is good. The content is very accurate. Music does have a way of reaching into our souls and lifting us out of the dredge and gall of misery. Your piece reflects that accurately and with great flare. That picture is an awesome accompaniment to your penning. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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great senryu, writer. The syllabic count is good. The content is very accurate. Music does have a way of reaching into our souls and lifting us out of the dredge and gall of misery. Your piece reflects that accurately and with great flare. That picture is an awesome accompaniment to your penning. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Thank yóu so much Janelle. I am so pleased you like it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Certainly an uplifting and 'melodic' write in that your phrases seem chosen to bring the mood 'up' in the second line and, perhaps, bring it 'down' in the third...an enjoyable piece! :) :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) ;)
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Certainly an uplifting and 'melodic' write in that your phrases seem chosen to bring the mood 'up' in the second line and, perhaps, bring it 'down' in the third...an enjoyable piece! :) :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) ;)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Many thanks Yvette
