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Beautiful Poems I Create.

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Comment from Lisa Heath
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Ricky and your wife; I am pleased to know you celebrated Jay's birthday with this religious poem. Please pray for him to go to heaven and see Christ Jesus the way the reviewer knowest you do, and allow a prt ofhim to live in your heart, too!
Lisa Heath

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thanks Lisa!
    I just cleaned it up for you!
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Good job, Ricky, with your tribute to Jason. I know you write of him and the fact that his organs breathed new life into others. For that you can be proud as Jason is proud of you. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
    Thanks Jenny as you know with life there's no guarantees there's no formal blessings of ever lasting expert ality which is quite spot the logically spotted logically logical or illogical depending on whether you live on Hell or you live on earth dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Sugarray77
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What a beautiful, memorial birthday poem for Jay. A lovely verse that you have written to honor him and our Heavenly Father. Thanks so much for sharing your love and faith with us. All the best! Melissa

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
    Hope you enjoyed it through your Heart as I do when I write for Jay!
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Sally Law
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I am always blessed to see how much you still love and care for you dear Jason. How you carry him in your heart is such a sweet thing. I continue to pray for you and your family and for healing from our got above. I hope you are well and good. All my best. Sally

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
    Sally your so sweet.
    Ricky...
reply by Sally Law on 09-Nov-2018
    And so are you. Such a deep and caring heart! Sal :+)
Comment from Earl Corp
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You hit all cylinders with this poem. It rhymes, it makes sense, it's definitely spiritual, and it touched me emotionally. When my baby died my uncle, who had gone through the same thing, told me the pain lessens but never goes away completely. Nice job.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
    Sorry and My Deepest Condolences....
    Ricky..
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A wonderful birthday proposal of peace for one day for Jay's birthday -- a beautiful write, Doc, and Happy Birthday to Jason! :) ;) Thanx, as always, for sharing! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
    Thanks Yvette.
    And Jaay thanks you too!
    Doctor Ricky1024