Guilt By Association, Chapter Three
Matters of the heart unfold.12 total reviews
Comment from beizanten
A very beautiful picture. Well-written opening paragraph, you describe the setting well. Interesting potline and characters. You describe the situation and the character emotion well.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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A very beautiful picture. Well-written opening paragraph, you describe the setting well. Interesting potline and characters. You describe the situation and the character emotion well.
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and comments! I appreciate you so much for the. I am glad you liked it.
All my best,
Sally
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
He screamed like a tormented spirit as he threw a beer can at the television. He missed it--hitting the cuckoo clock instead. It finally shut up, and he realized he should've done that months ago. "Stupid aggravating bird!" ...lol, this made me smile but in general this is so well written, so descriptive and so interesting I felt I was actually there. Very absorbing I adored this well done kindest regards and warmest wishes Meia you are a very talented writer :) x
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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He screamed like a tormented spirit as he threw a beer can at the television. He missed it--hitting the cuckoo clock instead. It finally shut up, and he realized he should've done that months ago. "Stupid aggravating bird!" ...lol, this made me smile but in general this is so well written, so descriptive and so interesting I felt I was actually there. Very absorbing I adored this well done kindest regards and warmest wishes Meia you are a very talented writer :) x
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Thank you Meia for the excellent review and comments. It means so much to me. I am glad you liked it and my colorful array of characters.
All my best,
Sally
