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Beautiful Poems I Create.

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Comment from Earl Corp
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Ricky this story has a more positive tone than a lot of the other ones you've written. I'm very glad you have this creative outlet to help you through these times of melancholy.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
    Glad you joined... 'The Meat Wagon.'
    Doctor Ricky1024
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Such an intriguing write, Doc, that takes the 'old' story of Jason and the Argonauts and relates it through your inventive and original imagery to the story of your wonderful son! :) ;) Great job and thank you for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
    Glad you enjoyed this one it made me feel special I started it out with just making it dedicated to Carol and then I brought in and deeper with birth from the womb and then I thought about him talking to her little bit into the fence story people thanks and have a wonderful day dr. Ricky 1024