The Blue Squirrel
some rhyme15 total reviews
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Endearing. Colors in nature are vivid images that touch us. I like this "staccato" style where words seem to be scattered around but they make perfect sense at the end.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
Endearing. Colors in nature are vivid images that touch us. I like this "staccato" style where words seem to be scattered around but they make perfect sense at the end.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanks for reading about the blue squirrel. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
What a lovely moment it must have been you see this blue tinged squirrel amidst all the Autumnal splender. Your words have given the most delightful imagery.
Loved it
Mitchell
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
What a lovely moment it must have been you see this blue tinged squirrel amidst all the Autumnal splender. Your words have given the most delightful imagery.
Loved it
Mitchell
Comment Written 03-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Thanks for reading about this unusual squirrel. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem, mermaids. There is good flow and the rhymes are an added bonus. The picture is perfect with your words. Blue is my favorite color. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
I enjoyed your poem, mermaids. There is good flow and the rhymes are an added bonus. The picture is perfect with your words. Blue is my favorite color. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 03-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem inspired by the blue tinted squirrel that you noticed in your back-yard. When we see something that inspire us it is always worthwhile to write something about it.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
A very well-written poem inspired by the blue tinted squirrel that you noticed in your back-yard. When we see something that inspire us it is always worthwhile to write something about it.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Aussie
Grey/brown can have a tint of blue in the sunshine. I liked your little ode to the squirrel. We don't have them here, I have seen the grey ones in London. When I was walking on crutches in a park, one cheeky squirrel climbed up my metal crutch, oops, that's not a branch, he scuttled away. Gave me a laugh. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
Grey/brown can have a tint of blue in the sunshine. I liked your little ode to the squirrel. We don't have them here, I have seen the grey ones in London. When I was walking on crutches in a park, one cheeky squirrel climbed up my metal crutch, oops, that's not a branch, he scuttled away. Gave me a laugh. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Yes, squirrels can be humorous. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Sasha
Imagination or not, it must have been a beautiful sight Lovely work with this poem. It flows smoothly and tells a special story too. It reads nicely when read aloud. Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
Imagination or not, it must have been a beautiful sight Lovely work with this poem. It flows smoothly and tells a special story too. It reads nicely when read aloud. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Thanks for your positive comments. Elaine
Comment from Spitfire
I like the format and the ongoing rhyme. Nice use color contrast to make this a special occasion. Good alliteration with touches, tail, and takes.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
I like the format and the ongoing rhyme. Nice use color contrast to make this a special occasion. Good alliteration with touches, tail, and takes.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet and adorable poem about the blue squirrel you have penned. It could have a bluish tint to it's color of the fur. You used very good words and I love the picture you chose to go with your words. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
This is a very sweet and adorable poem about the blue squirrel you have penned. It could have a bluish tint to it's color of the fur. You used very good words and I love the picture you chose to go with your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Thanks for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from tbacha58
Don't doubt your imagination ever and you did an excellent job here. you're writing is so deep and cute, loved the picture and your translation of your thoughts. Love Terry I am back.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
Don't doubt your imagination ever and you did an excellent job here. you're writing is so deep and cute, loved the picture and your translation of your thoughts. Love Terry I am back.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I'm a true blue fan too. I love your imagination (I bet it was a gray-blue)! What a sweet little poem. I love to watch out the window at the squirrels and birds. It's it a peaceful feeling. You're poem made me smile.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
I'm a true blue fan too. I love your imagination (I bet it was a gray-blue)! What a sweet little poem. I love to watch out the window at the squirrels and birds. It's it a peaceful feeling. You're poem made me smile.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine