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Comment from BeasPeas
This is a fun write. Behind the times, though. When we see the wimpy guys on TV ads it seems they are better at cleaning up the place than the women. Roles have reversed. Nice when couples share the task. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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This is a fun write. Behind the times, though. When we see the wimpy guys on TV ads it seems they are better at cleaning up the place than the women. Roles have reversed. Nice when couples share the task. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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I blame Igor. He should have been keeping this place up.
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LOL. I agree. It's his fault.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Haha ... love the humor in this clever contest entry. Well done, mystery author! I think Frankenstein's gonna need more than just one maid to clean that mess up.
:) Best wishes for the contest.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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Haha ... love the humor in this clever contest entry. Well done, mystery author! I think Frankenstein's gonna need more than just one maid to clean that mess up.
:) Best wishes for the contest.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 01-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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Thanks, b-girl
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Yeah, he's definitely a bachelor, and he wasn't made in America. Every time I think of Frankenstein, I think of Mel Brook's movie. Nice, tight, little thoughtereenie.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Yeah, he's definitely a bachelor, and he wasn't made in America. Every time I think of Frankenstein, I think of Mel Brook's movie. Nice, tight, little thoughtereenie.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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I think tge footage is from Yoing Frankenstein.
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Bill;
> What an out-of-the-box thinking for a theme as this conceptual idea along with the picture and well written composition creates a humorous fundamental need for a Maid or woman to take care of his messy Laboratory.
> Good luck in the contest, Bill, take care and have a good one.
Alx
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Cheers, Bill;
> What an out-of-the-box thinking for a theme as this conceptual idea along with the picture and well written composition creates a humorous fundamental need for a Maid or woman to take care of his messy Laboratory.
> Good luck in the contest, Bill, take care and have a good one.
Alx
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Alex, for the kind review.
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You're very welcome, Bill.
Alx
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed imagining the setting here, somewhere in the dank dungeon where Frankenstein does his best work. One can imagine the kind of "litter" he leaves about him.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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I enjoyed imagining the setting here, somewhere in the dank dungeon where Frankenstein does his best work. One can imagine the kind of "litter" he leaves about him.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Rod.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a great take on The Bride of Frankenstein. I love love it. I'm sorry, the best I can do is give you two snaps up and an attaboy or atta girl. I hope you identify as one of them.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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This is a great take on The Bride of Frankenstein. I love love it. I'm sorry, the best I can do is give you two snaps up and an attaboy or atta girl. I hope you identify as one of them.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Thomas.