Comment from Ogden

Excellent

I voted for your entry, but there is an error I think you ought to fix.
(Or count on nobody noticing.) "Sleeking around" has no meaning. I think you meant "slinking."

Good luck!

Ogden (Call me Don)

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thanks for the read and the catch. I have edited.

reply by Ogden on 01-Nov-2018

You're very welcome, Harry.
Don

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love this unusual write from the dogs perspective for a change! The loyal servant, whilst the cat lazes about and pleases himself and acts superior! Just loved your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thanks for the read and the comments. I am not a cat lover, as one can tell. They are too arrogant for me. Never happy to see you except when it is meal time for them.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Great work up for your poem and its just about what a dog thinks of a cat and his life as a spoilt creature that does nothing but takes up space.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thanks for the read and the comment. Much appreciated.

reply by country ranch writer on 30-Oct-2018

smiles