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Viewing comments for Chapter 85 "Tongue Twister."A Witty Ditty Anthology
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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
You did a really good job with this piece. It's fun and I got about six words in before I began stuttering...lol So job done.
GMG
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Hi there,
You did a really good job with this piece. It's fun and I got about six words in before I began stuttering...lol So job done.
GMG
Comment Written 01-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your taking time to read and review my work.
Comment from Earl Corp
This is the first tongue teister I've read on Fanstory. This is right up there with Woodchuck and Sally, actually I think its more difficult. You said it goes with a tune, which one? Very nice job.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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This is the first tongue teister I've read on Fanstory. This is right up there with Woodchuck and Sally, actually I think its more difficult. You said it goes with a tune, which one? Very nice job.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your taking time to read and review my work.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Peter Piper penned a pickled poem?
Yes, tongue-twisters are always fun and yours is no exception. Cute picture and I'm pretty sure Billy Boy's brown butter buns would make a very fine lunch.
Steve
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Peter Piper penned a pickled poem?
Yes, tongue-twisters are always fun and yours is no exception. Cute picture and I'm pretty sure Billy Boy's brown butter buns would make a very fine lunch.
Steve
Comment Written 01-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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HELLO KIWISTEVEH: Thank you for reading and reviewing my work here. You are appreciated. I'm pleased that you like my tongue-twisters. There will be others. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.