I Give Up, Looks like Skid Marks
Humorous rhyming couplet contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Rod A. White
Excellent! The ol' sticky sh*t. Um.. er.. I mean I have no idea what you're talking about. :/ This is a fine example of a well-written and humerous couplet poem. Two thumbs up!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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Excellent! The ol' sticky sh*t. Um.. er.. I mean I have no idea what you're talking about. :/ This is a fine example of a well-written and humerous couplet poem. Two thumbs up!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018
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Thank you for the great and funny review, Rod. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great weekend.
Ron
Comment from LyndaS
Well welcome back to the swamp! Lol. While I find the subject matter disgusting I also find it funny which is the goal of this thing. Where on earth did you find art of somebody taking a crap? And in closing.... Skid marks have claimed and shamed us all. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Well welcome back to the swamp! Lol. While I find the subject matter disgusting I also find it funny which is the goal of this thing. Where on earth did you find art of somebody taking a crap? And in closing.... Skid marks have claimed and shamed us all. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Lol, I know they have, that's exactly what I'm saying, no one can claim they haven't, haha. Thank you for the great review, Lynda. I found the pic in a Google image search. I had to add a final touch to it though. The original pic didn't have toilet paper in his hand. I added that. The picture was slightly lacking in meaning without it, lol. I'm glad you liked this gross piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from poesyapprentice
Hey you! Did you mean in your butt or and, lol? Sorry I haven't been by the profile lately. How's the winning coming? I'll do better. I think I still have a shorty that's paying. Did you get started on your new job? I hope things have improved. The holidays are coming. Ugh, I so dread it! Good luck on your silly entry ;)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Hey you! Did you mean in your butt or and, lol? Sorry I haven't been by the profile lately. How's the winning coming? I'll do better. I think I still have a shorty that's paying. Did you get started on your new job? I hope things have improved. The holidays are coming. Ugh, I so dread it! Good luck on your silly entry ;)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Lol. I didn't see it that way. I thought the cadence would have made it clear but I'm sure there will be someone out there not interpreting it correctly. I fixed it. I actually meant 'in' right there.
There's nothing really new in my portfolio. I haven't been doing anything on here for weeks. My job got me started with someone new but it turns out they needed me even less than the other crapping place did. So I've been fretting over money issues and depressed. Not too motivated to write anything when life has me down.
Yeah, the holidays...weeeeeee. That's sarcasm if it wasn't clear, lol. Thank you for the great review, M. I'm glad you liked this dumb thing. Have a great day.
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Yes, dear, the sarcasm was clear. I'm really sorry that the other place wasn't what you had hoped. How well I know that financial stress is a royal bitch, and the holidays only add to the misery. Sometimes I write my best pieces when I'm depressed, but we all deal differently, lol, or maybe I just think I do. I really hope things start looking up for you very soon. Best wishes, my friend.
Comment from William Ross
hahaha a good humorous couplet for the contest great humor as I'm sure most have been here at one time or another, hahha. Good luck on this and have a great day
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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hahaha a good humorous couplet for the contest great humor as I'm sure most have been here at one time or another, hahha. Good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, William. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. You have a fantastic day as well.
Ron
Comment from Pantygynt
I have never admitted it before. I thought I was the only one and that my mother hadn't taught me how to do it properly. You are a brave person to, shall I say, come clean on this one.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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I have never admitted it before. I thought I was the only one and that my mother hadn't taught me how to do it properly. You are a brave person to, shall I say, come clean on this one.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Lol, come clean...haha. Thank you for the great review and the chuckle, Pantygynt. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great day.
Ron
