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Comment from Six-Star Writer
Cute. But I didn't like the new Amarillo boss. He seemed like a real @$!##!$@! Why lead the poor deer hostess along like that. There was no reason for him to pretend not to speak deer.nwould never work for that prick.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Cute. But I didn't like the new Amarillo boss. He seemed like a real @$!##!$@! Why lead the poor deer hostess along like that. There was no reason for him to pretend not to speak deer.nwould never work for that prick.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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I patterned him after a possum boss I once had. The armadillo had thicker skin though.
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Yeah, bosses can be a pain. I've hardly ever met a boss I looked in the past 56 years.
Comment from judiverse
Those armadillos can be such cutthroat business people. I'd like to see that whole herd (or whatever they're called) show up. The hostess could file a discrimination suit. She was clearly fired for being a deer. He will probably put an armadillo relative in her place. That's nepotism as well as discrimination. My sympathies are with the deer. Great fun with the language. judi
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Those armadillos can be such cutthroat business people. I'd like to see that whole herd (or whatever they're called) show up. The hostess could file a discrimination suit. She was clearly fired for being a deer. He will probably put an armadillo relative in her place. That's nepotism as well as discrimination. My sympathies are with the deer. Great fun with the language. judi
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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The restaurants are all vegetarian as well.
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The vegetarian restaurant in the town where I live just closed. Too many armadillos, maybe. judi
Comment from Earl Corp
So Armadillos are going to becoome the next Hiltons? Must have got the money from an insurance settlement from being hit by a car while trying to cross the road. I'm really ennjoying the armadillo stories. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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So Armadillos are going to becoome the next Hiltons? Must have got the money from an insurance settlement from being hit by a car while trying to cross the road. I'm really ennjoying the armadillo stories. Good job.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from Kerry Foley
This is a really cute little story, Bill. You always incorporate great witty humor with fun puns. Most entertaining. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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This is a really cute little story, Bill. You always incorporate great witty humor with fun puns. Most entertaining. ~Kerry
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Kerry
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You're very welcome, sorry for the late reply:))
Comment from nomi338
In a land where more than one tongue is spoken it is beneficial to be able to speak many tongues or run the risk of ruining your future by misspeaking to the wrong person at the most inappropriate time. Oh, and one must never, ever speak with a forked tongue.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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In a land where more than one tongue is spoken it is beneficial to be able to speak many tongues or run the risk of ruining your future by misspeaking to the wrong person at the most inappropriate time. Oh, and one must never, ever speak with a forked tongue.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Armadillo.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a fun script -- an animal restaurant! :) :) You've got quite the imagination there, sir - loved the back and forth once it was obvious they were 'not on the same wavelength'...made me chuckle. :) :) The ending line, however, seals the chuckle deal to a full on smile - thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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What a fun script -- an animal restaurant! :) :) You've got quite the imagination there, sir - loved the back and forth once it was obvious they were 'not on the same wavelength'...made me chuckle. :) :) The ending line, however, seals the chuckle deal to a full on smile - thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Yvette.
Comment from WildWithWords
This has a quirky amusement factor to it. It started out like a joke related to "An armadillo walked into a bar....."
The "heard of our herd" line wasn't missed but I would've liked to have seen a couple more plays on words along similar lines. Nice effort.
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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This has a quirky amusement factor to it. It started out like a joke related to "An armadillo walked into a bar....."
The "heard of our herd" line wasn't missed but I would've liked to have seen a couple more plays on words along similar lines. Nice effort.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Bill
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, that was inevitable that Ms. Deer would be fired. But Mr. Armadillo could have given maybe a few more details about his name. Good thing he's the new manager. Hope his granddaughter does all the communication.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Lol. Well, that was inevitable that Ms. Deer would be fired. But Mr. Armadillo could have given maybe a few more details about his name. Good thing he's the new manager. Hope his granddaughter does all the communication.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka. Armadillo is a simple language consisting of one word. You have to hear the inflections to get it.
Comment from Raul1
Very funny piece you've wrote here. The armadillo only said one word and it was annoying to the hostess. But, she got fired by the armadillo. Very good story.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Very funny piece you've wrote here. The armadillo only said one word and it was annoying to the hostess. But, she got fired by the armadillo. Very good story.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Raul
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Bill. Cute again. But I don't think Ms. Deer should have been fired. I think the granddaughter should have said the same thing to the deer. Haha. Nice grandpa armadillo story. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Hi Bill. Cute again. But I don't think Ms. Deer should have been fired. I think the granddaughter should have said the same thing to the deer. Haha. Nice grandpa armadillo story. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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I was contemplating that, but a couple of voices suggested that THAT would sound too 'I am Groot-ish'. Another said that the dry humor would come off as incomplete. I settled for giving her a bit more of an entitled tone that would contrast with her dismissal. Thanks so much for giving this a look.
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It definitely would NOT have been a story then. I was not suggesting you change it. Thinking too much about real life