One copper leaf
a color poem.2 total reviews
Comment from Michele Harber
This very nicely fits the Short and Colorful writing prompt
This poem perfectly fits the Short and Colorful writing prompt. I like that you didn't leave your imagery just to colors but went onto the specific detail of the leaf's being stuck on a broken window pane. This was nicely done.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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This very nicely fits the Short and Colorful writing prompt
This poem perfectly fits the Short and Colorful writing prompt. I like that you didn't leave your imagery just to colors but went onto the specific detail of the leaf's being stuck on a broken window pane. This was nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thanks for the review. I have been walking in the woods and see such beauty. It was either the copper leave or the ice encrusted mushrooms. Cheers, j
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Why not write both?
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Okay
Cheers, j
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Now changes inevitably taking effect, spring rains becoming unstuck, autumn is getting fade to fader; sweetness and colourful and fragrant state appearing by degrees; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Now changes inevitably taking effect, spring rains becoming unstuck, autumn is getting fade to fader; sweetness and colourful and fragrant state appearing by degrees; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thanks for the review. So many beautiful sights to see in the forest as we change seasons. Also loved the ice encrusted mushrooms. Cheers, j
