Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Old Gold."Second book Of Series.
2 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest.
You've described your Grammas very well in so few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest.
You've described your Grammas very well in so few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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HELLO SHARON: Thank you for reading and reviewing my work here. You are appreciated. God bless:.Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Pantygynt
This doesn't smack of fiction to me seems more like an experience perhaps recalled or witnessed. I am also confused that this is posted as a script whehn I think it is a poem. These matters are relevant to the contest you have entered.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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This doesn't smack of fiction to me seems more like an experience perhaps recalled or witnessed. I am also confused that this is posted as a script whehn I think it is a poem. These matters are relevant to the contest you have entered.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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HELLO PANTYGYNT: Thank you for your comments. They are appreciated. My friend, this IS a poem. It is a script of a poem. According to, The Random House College Dictionary, on page number 1183, under, "script," at definition number 5, a script is any system of writing. As for, "Today, Gramma Amy shows us all how to blow pretty bubbles." ....This is an eleven word, "Flash fiction."
Thank you for helping me, my friend. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
