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Juxtaposition of Self

Positive V/S Negative Contest Entry

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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a great response to this writing prompt. I love the description of the positive versus negative emotions of the girl looking in the mirror. As readers, writers, and those with human emotion, your poem can resonate with many. Well written, and a great contest entry.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    Thanx for the read and review, Cindy -- so glad you dropped by and even more excited that you enjoyed the write! :) :) I think there are always two people (or more!) rolled into each of us -- and it's a matter of personal choice which one we show the world each day! :) ;) Have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
Comment from Kelly Hanna
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This is a great short piece! I liked the fact that you used a mirror to depict a positive and a negative self image. Something that we all struggle with. For me, this was hard topic to write about and you've done well! Great job on a short piece that makes one consider the good and the bad about oneself.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanx for the read and review, Kelly -- so glad you dropped by and even more excited that you enjoyed the write! :) :) I think there are always two people (or more!) rolled into each of us -- and it's a matter of personal choice which one we show the world each day! :) ;) Have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
Comment from Tia Attwood
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Hi

This is an exceptional 5'7'5 set of poems that you have composed. You have fulfilled the task well. negative being sad inside while projecting to the world that your happy,
good luck in the contest.

Great job

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanx for the read and review, Tia -- so glad you dropped by and even more excited that you enjoyed the write! :) :) I think there are always two people (or more!) rolled into each of us -- and it's a matter of personal choice which one we show the world each day! :) ;) Have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your focus on the woman in the mirror clearly fits the dark/light theme of the contest. I like the picture paired with your well-chosen words. Those words are descriptive and create great imagery. Good use of colored font, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanx for the read and review, Jan -- so glad you dropped by and even more excited that you enjoyed the write! :) :) I think there are always two people (or more!) rolled into each of us -- and it's a matter of personal choice which one we show the world each day! :) ;) Have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
Comment from meeshu
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This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. Very well penned, V/S. Contestant. and colorful too..

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanx for the read and review, dude -- so glad you dropped by and even more excited that you enjoyed the write! :) :) I think there are always two people (or more!) rolled into each of us -- and it's a matter of personal choice which one we show the world each day! :) ;) Have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
Comment from donette1914
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very well written with deep emotions
very impressive
very believable
a very well penned poem and I really appreciate your work
thank you for sharing and I hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 review on Oct 25, 2018

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanx for the read and review, donette -- so glad you dropped by and even more excited that you enjoyed the write! :) :) I think there are always two people (or more!) rolled into each of us -- and it's a matter of personal choice which one we show the world each day! :) ;) Have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
Comment from DonandVicki
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Your poem caught my attention right away with the image that you used. I like Picasso's art work. The image in the mirrors can be so different that the true reality behind the mirror.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanx for the read and review, Don/Vicki -- so glad you dropped by and even more excited that you enjoyed the write! :) :) I think there are always two people (or more!) rolled into each of us -- and it's a matter of personal choice which one we show the world each day! :) ;) Have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)