Comment from Tia Attwood

Excellent

Hi

Art within an art. van gouph's picture represents this poem well. perfect 5'7'5 syllables across all lines and loved how you reflected history through your poem.

Great job

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018

Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful artwork and very nice presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-I really like your poem.
-The imagery is vivid, like
a Van Gogh painting.
-I especially like the comparison
to Van Gogh's eyes.
-Your last line is a very good satori.
-A strong entry; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018

Thank you for sharing your insightful sentiments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 24-Oct-2018

You are very welcome.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Cute play on words...Iris is part of the eye....lol
I loved the blue Iris reflects the blue Van Gogh's eyes of China blue...and the pain....
I love irises and Vincent Van Gogh is my favorite artist
God bless

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018

Thanks for your insightful review- you got it!