Comment from Bill Schott

Good

This script, Satan's House, has a funny story that keeps our two shenanigan seekers busy with all the spooky goings on in the old house. There is a LOT of narration in the beginning and here and there as it goes along. In a script, there isn't really a CHORUS or story teller, usually. The information comes from the character dialogue. This separates the short story, which this is, actually, from a script.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

HELLO BILL: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my short story. I fully appreciate your advise. Again...thank you, Bill.
This short story has narration, mixed with dialogue. According to The Random House College Dictionary...on page 1183 under "script," at definition number 5...a script is..." any system of writing." That was the way I was thinking when I wrote, "Satan's House." One of my reviewers once said to me. "Rhonnie, you write a little left of the center, but that's okay." And well...I guess I do. But that's just my style. It's what makes my writing me. God bless you and yours, Bill. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Many of the angels in heaven liked Lucifer,
more than they liked God.

This is a sobering thought. When God and Satan parted ways, one-third of the angels said Satan's going to win.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018

Thank you very much. I appreciate your taking time to read and review my work.