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tanka poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from meeshu
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This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. Very well penned, Contestant. I think we all know that guy..

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thanks for the insightful review. Carpe diem. j
Comment from Michele Harber
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This is a well-written Tanka poem, and it makes an important point about not putting things off, as we never know if our own tomorrow will come. It's a viable entry for the "The Life He Almost Lived" contest, and I wish you luck.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thanks for the encouraging review. Cheers, j
reply by Michele Harber on 24-Oct-2018
    You?re welcome.