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Wisdom calls Aloud.
3 total reviews
Comment from
Gert sherwood
Hello rhonnie69
You gave us an example of what happens to one they repel from what their parents tell you not to do. I just wonder if the mother knew it was her son that stole her purse.
Gert
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
HELLO GERT: My dear friend. When her son turned himself in, he told police who he was...and what he had done.
With his confession, and Mom's Driver License...police called Mom.
Comment from
meeshu
this is a great write, the suspense is built up throughout the entire story and the big payoff at the end is an O'Henry-like twist at the end. well done, rhonnie.................meeshu
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
Comment from
mermaids
Writing is therapeutic and you have learned from your ways of the past. This is an important story to teach others, redemption is for everyone and people can change like you did. I commend you for writing your story.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
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