Comment from Richard J

Excellent

"GULP!"
One thing I can say for sure about this sensually seething inferno, Yvette, is that it definitely connected with Me in the most vibrantly enthralling way ... uh-HUH!
This one doesn't need a sexual content warning, it needs a "RADIOACTIVE" sign ... goodness-ME!
Love that IIM (illustration in motion); in fact, the entire presentation is perfect, right down to the keen red blending into orange font motif.

I would give you a Thank You hug, but you're just too HOT to handle! ~ Richard ; )-

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018

Funny man, Sir Richard! :) :) Glad you enjoyed this fun write -- it was a 'vibes' contest and my mind automatically went 'there'...child of the seventies, I suppose! :) ;) Thanx for your WONDERFUL review, and I'm so glad you stopped by! :) ;) Take care and have a great upcoming weekend! :) Yvette :)

reply by Richard J on 26-Oct-2018

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a super sensual poem. Steamy. Wonderful job. Image supports your words. You made each word count and made it look effortless. I read your bio profile which is impressive. Marilyn

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018

So glad my write 'warmed' you a bit, Marilyn -- always good to remember those feelings once in a while...reminds us how to breathe just a little deeper, eh?!! LOL!! :) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to send a few vibes of your own this week....preferably the welcome kind! :) :) :) Yvette [can sign my name now that the contest is over] :) :) :)

reply by BeasPeas on 22-Oct-2018

Hi Yvette. Lovely name. :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. I don't know if that's a romance poem or a hot flash poem. (sorry!) Very cool presentation/graphic to go with it - (clarifies instead of my strange way of taking it.) And yes, sometimes, when the vibe is right, it's a beautiful thing.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018

Well -- it's a little bit of both, Helen -- always good to remember those feelings once in a while...remind us how to breathe just a little deeper, eh?!! LOL!! :) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to send a few vibes of your own this weekend....preferably the welcome kind! :) :) :)

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

OH to be young again...it's okay when we "act" young too. :) I love the "my skin's too tight..." A very sensual 5-7-5 and all the right "vibes" are mentioned. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018

You got that right, Cindy!! So glad my write warmed you a bit -- always good to remember those feelings once in a while...remind us how to breathe just a little deeper, eh?!! LOL!! :) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to send a few vibes of your own this weekend....preferably the welcome kind! :) :) :)

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Cool graphic you chose to accompany your poem, it enhanced the reading experience. 5-7-5 isn't a lot to work with, you barely can express a thought then you're done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018

You are so right, Earl!! And I'm glad to have 'enhanced your reading experience' -- always good to remember those feelings once in a while...remind us how to breathe just a little deeper, eh?!! LOL!! :) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to send a few vibes of your own this weekend....preferably the welcome kind! :) :) :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

When you feel the vibe is right, and you wish not any more to bear with, you obviously wish to get yourself off or request for taking it off from your sight; excess of anything is bad; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018

So glad my write spoke to you a bit, DR ALCREATOR -- always good to remember those feelings once in a while...remind us how to breathe just a little deeper, eh?!! LOL!! :) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to send a few vibes of your own this weekend....preferably the welcome kind! :) :) :)

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is fantastic even in this short form. Well done, Firestarter. great pic. and poem..

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018

So glad the image worked for you, meeshu -- always good to recall those feelings once in a while...reminds us how to breathe just a little deeper, eh?!! LOL!! :) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to send a few vibes of your own this weekend....we ALL need breathing exercises!! :) :) :) Firestarter ;)

Comment from hari anand

Exceptional

Wow, in love with the picture and what a poetry to compliment it to another level, awesome is the words, thank you for participating in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018

So glad my write 'warmed' you, hargunanand -- always good to remember those feelings once in a while...reminds us how to breathe just a little deeper, eh?!! LOL!! :) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to send a few vibes of your own this weekend....preferably the welcome kind! :) :) :)

reply by hari anand on 18-Oct-2018

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Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Well, this is certainly a flaming vibe
heat wave, burning love all wrapped in one
Excellent 5-7-5, you may need to dial 9-1-1
Oh, to be young, indeed
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018

So glad my write warmed you a bit, RS -- always good to remember those feelings once in a while...reminds us how to breathe just a little deeper, eh?!! LOL!! :) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to send a few vibes of your own this weekend....preferably the welcome kind! :) :) :)