Seasons Change
The warmth can still be found...7 total reviews
Comment from Marie Foster1
Thank you for the excellent visual. Your choice of words is impeccable. I was told by another poet on this site that your work was worth reading. I have to thank him for the recommendation. Excellent job!!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the excellent visual. Your choice of words is impeccable. I was told by another poet on this site that your work was worth reading. I have to thank him for the recommendation. Excellent job!!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for stopping in and for the wonderful comments, Marie -- always welcome and appreciated! :) :) I'm trying not to be too sad that summer's leaving...but as long as Fall doesn't get too cold too soon, I'll be brave and take it!! :) LOL!! Have a great weekend of watching the seasons change from your venue!!! :) :)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Poet!
Your Sedoka offering is beautifully crafted. It is filled with keen visual and emotive imagery. I live in northern Michigan, and just today - as I looked outside at the spitting rain and snow - I folded summer beach towels, putting them away until next summer.
Best wishes in the contest: your presentation is lovely.
diane
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Hello Mystery Poet!
Your Sedoka offering is beautifully crafted. It is filled with keen visual and emotive imagery. I live in northern Michigan, and just today - as I looked outside at the spitting rain and snow - I folded summer beach towels, putting them away until next summer.
Best wishes in the contest: your presentation is lovely.
diane
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for stopping in for the read and review, Mrs. KT -- your comments and analysis are welcome and appreciated! :) :) I'm trying not to be too sad that summer's leaving...but as long as Fall doesn't get too cold too soon, I'll be brave and take it!! :) LOL!! Have a great weekend of watching the seasons change from your venue!!! :) :)
Comment from Anntonette
I love the autumnal colors you used for the words in your piece; from green to orange, from light to dark from dark to light. This was so creative, it's very structured!
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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I love the autumnal colors you used for the words in your piece; from green to orange, from light to dark from dark to light. This was so creative, it's very structured!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for stopping in for the read and review, Anntonette -- your comments and analysis are welcome and appreciated! :) :) I'm trying not to be too sad that summer's leaving...but as long as Fall doesn't get too cold too soon, I'll be brave and take it!! :) LOL!! Have a great weekend of watching the seasons change from your venue!!! :) :)
Comment from meeshu
beach towels to blankets, I dig it. you aren't kidding about the evenings getting cool. this the strange time on the high desert. days--77F, nights--33F. enjoy your autumn while you still gottem<<<<
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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beach towels to blankets, I dig it. you aren't kidding about the evenings getting cool. this the strange time on the high desert. days--77F, nights--33F. enjoy your autumn while you still gottem<<<<
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Bite your tongue, dude!! :) ;) The thirties are NOT welcome here.....at least not yet!! LOL :) I'm just trying not to be too sad that summer's leaving...but as long as Fall doesn't get too cold too soon, I'll be brave and take it......and not like a whiny girl.....at least not yet!! :) Have a great weekend of watching the seasons change from your venue!!! :) :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
You're killing me! Our sixes are so meagerly assigned, you'd think they cost the site to allot them. But this is a SPLENDID poem, in every respect. It evokes the most wonderful imagery, and your presentation is simply elegant!
OUTSTANDING!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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You're killing me! Our sixes are so meagerly assigned, you'd think they cost the site to allot them. But this is a SPLENDID poem, in every respect. It evokes the most wonderful imagery, and your presentation is simply elegant!
OUTSTANDING!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for stopping in for the read and review, Dawn --I am so very glad you enjoyed, Beautiful Canadian! :) :) I'm trying not to be too sad that summer's leaving...but as long as Fall doesn't get too cold too soon, I'll be brave and take it!! :) LOL!! Have a great weekend of watching the seasons change from your venue!!! :) :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is effective and
creates a good picture of autumn,
as "summer slips away."
-I like the personification
in the poem, as well.
-A good example is the
blankets unfolding their warmth.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is effective and
creates a good picture of autumn,
as "summer slips away."
-I like the personification
in the poem, as well.
-A good example is the
blankets unfolding their warmth.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for stopping in for the read and review, Pam -- your comments and analysis are welcome and appreciated! :) :) I'm trying not to be too sad that summer's leaving...but as long as Fall doesn't get too cold too soon, I'll be brave and take it!! :) LOL!! Have a great weekend of watching the seasons change from your venue!!! :) :)
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You are very welcome. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from RodG
I like how you have contrasted the seasons by showing how blankets are used (or put away) in each and how warmth has morphed into "crispness." also, one seasons "slips away" as the other flat-out arrives.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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I like how you have contrasted the seasons by showing how blankets are used (or put away) in each and how warmth has morphed into "crispness." also, one seasons "slips away" as the other flat-out arrives.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for stopping in for the read and review, Rod -- your comments and analysis are welcome and appreciated! :) :) I'm trying not to be too sad that summer's leaving...but as long as Fall doesn't get too cold too soon, I'll be brave and take it!! :) LOL!! Have a great weekend of watching the seasons change from your venue!!! :) :)
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You are very welcome. Rod