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A Word To The Wise Is Sufficient.

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Wisdom calls Aloud.

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Comment from Honey Bee Jean
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This is a very cute, yet insightful peice you've created. It's challenging to combine those two things but you did quite a lovely job. Thank you so much for sharing and happy writing!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2018

Comment from LIJ Red
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Hm. A kind of a free verse fairy tale with a hint of the spiritual. Looks fine to me.
I keep trying to think of Biblical references about frogs. Only one coming mind is Moses' plague of frogs on Egypt...Moses was a biker, the roar of his Triumph was heard throughout the east...

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018