Physical Memories
Missing you...35 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Yvette, this is wonderful, tender and bittersweet. I missed this somehow and wanted to congratulate you on your recognition! I realized when I saw it, I had not reviewed your fine piece! Very well done. I'm so proud of you!
All my best,
Sally
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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Yvette, this is wonderful, tender and bittersweet. I missed this somehow and wanted to congratulate you on your recognition! I realized when I saw it, I had not reviewed your fine piece! Very well done. I'm so proud of you!
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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Wow, Sally - thank you so very much for your read and review here -- never too late to drop by any time for any read!! :) You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old we get, the hormones still catch up to us once in a while, doesn't it?!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by and be sure to have great start to the weekend filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)
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You?re always welcome. My pleasure entirely. :+)
Comment from Raul1
It's like a romantic poem. This person is wooing a woman. She does sound like someone special. I like the poem. It's good. Good luck in the contest! Perfect.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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It's like a romantic poem. This person is wooing a woman. She does sound like someone special. I like the poem. It's good. Good luck in the contest! Perfect.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the read and review -- have a great remainder of the week!
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is short and sweet and very emotional. The nature metaphors work well to describe the fleeting love and the longing for it to return. Well done.
Congrats of placing second in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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This poem is short and sweet and very emotional. The nature metaphors work well to describe the fleeting love and the longing for it to return. Well done.
Congrats of placing second in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, dragonpoet, and especially for the congratulatory message! :) You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx for dropping by and be sure to have great week filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)
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Don't mention it, Yvette. It's what we're here to do.
Joan
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Congratulations on your win, but the poem didn't do it for me. To trite and old hat. Kennecticut
p.s. I hate math. No disrespect.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Congratulations on your win, but the poem didn't do it for me. To trite and old hat. Kennecticut
p.s. I hate math. No disrespect.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I see
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Oops, "too."
Comment from Shanbreen
Yvette, another great one from you. Loved the way you weaved the effects of weather on the manifestation of physical contact. Loved the first line: Your kiss was in the rain last night... It's so romantic -- a reminiscence of the Indian in me where rain is always an aspect of love, romance, and fun.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Yvette, another great one from you. Loved the way you weaved the effects of weather on the manifestation of physical contact. Loved the first line: Your kiss was in the rain last night... It's so romantic -- a reminiscence of the Indian in me where rain is always an aspect of love, romance, and fun.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Oh, Shanbreen! Thank you so very much for these wonderful comments and for those shining stars! You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old I get, the hormones still catch up to me once in a while - ugh!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by - looking forward to seening some of your poetry writes soon!!! Be sure to have great week ahead filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment from Marie Foster1
Ok, so there is a correlation between being super intelligent and the ability to write good poetry...who knew??!! I love everythig about this poem. Usually when I read "romance" poetry it leaves me a little let down. This poem did not disappoint. Wow!!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Ok, so there is a correlation between being super intelligent and the ability to write good poetry...who knew??!! I love everythig about this poem. Usually when I read "romance" poetry it leaves me a little let down. This poem did not disappoint. Wow!!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Wow, Marie! Thank you so very much for these wonderful comments and for the six shining stars! You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old we get, the hormones still catch up to us once in a while, don't they?!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by and be sure to have great remainder of the week filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment from Boogienights
This is so beautiful and romantic, I loved it. It's what every lover wants to hear, I think I'll give it to my husband to read to motivate him...lol. Thanks for sharing this lovely peice.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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This is so beautiful and romantic, I loved it. It's what every lover wants to hear, I think I'll give it to my husband to read to motivate him...lol. Thanks for sharing this lovely peice.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Oh,Boogie -- I am so very glad you got out of this that for which I was aiming!! :) You'll have to let me know what the husband thought...LOL! :) You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old we get, the hormones still catch up to us once in a while, doesn't it?!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by and be sure to have great start to the weekend filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment from Terry Kay
Mr. Roger,. I enjoyed your poem. Very well written and it draws a picture for me bringing back memories briefly. I hope your love has already come back!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Mr. Roger,. I enjoyed your poem. Very well written and it draws a picture for me bringing back memories briefly. I hope your love has already come back!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Wow, Terry! Thank you so very much for these wonderful comments and for the six shining stars! You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old we get, the hormones still catch up to us once in a while, don't they??!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by and be sure to have great remainder of the week filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)
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I know what you mean. Thanks to you and you have a good weekend too..
Comment from June Sargent
This is a lovely tribute to the memories of a very special person. With words you painted a picture that involved our senses. Touching, poignant and very well penned. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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This is a lovely tribute to the memories of a very special person. With words you painted a picture that involved our senses. Touching, poignant and very well penned. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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So glad you enjoyed this one, June! :) You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old we get, the hormones still catch up to us once in a while, doesn't it?!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by and be sure to have great start to the weekend filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment from Marie Werner
Beautiful and expressive, the words really make me feel the narrator's longing. And the lovely photo completes the impression nicely.
Thanks so much for posting and have a great day!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Beautiful and expressive, the words really make me feel the narrator's longing. And the lovely photo completes the impression nicely.
Thanks so much for posting and have a great day!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Marie!! :) I am so very glad you got out of this that for which I was aiming!! :) You know, I wrote this one on a rainy day when I already had 'the blues' ... not a broken heart, just the occasional 'female thang' (seems no matter how old we get, the hormones still catch up to us once in a while, doesn't it?!! lol) ... but it made the mood and word choice more 'straight forward'. :) ;) :) Thanx, as always, for dropping by and be sure to have great start to the weekend filled with adventures of the heart or of the mind (or both!!)! :) :) Yvette :)
