By His Stripes
a spiritual acrostic poem5 total reviews
Comment from forestport12
Amen. I so agree. A nice way to move doctrine through the skill of poetry. Powerful and original on more than one level. You didn't let yourself get stuck with using the word Bible and take the easy approach.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Amen. I so agree. A nice way to move doctrine through the skill of poetry. Powerful and original on more than one level. You didn't let yourself get stuck with using the word Bible and take the easy approach.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Thank you so very much for the 6 stars and the encouraging review. To tell you the truth I just couldn't get anything going using the word Bible.
Comment from papa55mike
Well, I don't know why they bashed you on this one, I like it! The only thing I'd do differently is to make the first letters of each bold. On your next one, try the Advanced Editor on your writing page. It's fun to play with the fonts, colors.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Well, I don't know why they bashed you on this one, I like it! The only thing I'd do differently is to make the first letters of each bold. On your next one, try the Advanced Editor on your writing page. It's fun to play with the fonts, colors.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Good suggestion-thank you. Also, thank you for the stars and good wishes.
Comment from aryr
Sorry but you used the wrong font color on the wrong background color, I could just see the hint of words. I do so hope you do well in the contest, thanks for sharing even if I couldn't read it. Ahaaaaa it is now red on white, when I first saw it, it was a red on red. Now that I could read it I really enjoyed it, it was so inspirational. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Sorry but you used the wrong font color on the wrong background color, I could just see the hint of words. I do so hope you do well in the contest, thanks for sharing even if I couldn't read it. Ahaaaaa it is now red on white, when I first saw it, it was a red on red. Now that I could read it I really enjoyed it, it was so inspirational. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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I changed the background color though you're the only reviewer who couldn't read it!
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I went back and checked it again, with it being red on white rather than red on red I was able to read and enjoy, so I changed the grading to a five. Thanks for sharing.
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You are so welcome. I'm glad the reading was better for you the second time around.
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You are most welcome.
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Thanks.
Comment from SLMorrical
I liked it. It was very inspirational. Very well written. It flows well. I could feel the faith and belief you have in God in this poem. Very well done. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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I liked it. It was very inspirational. Very well written. It flows well. I could feel the faith and belief you have in God in this poem. Very well done. Keep writing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thank you ever so much. I greatly appreciate the stars, the comment and the words of encouragement.
Comment from Sally Law
Love this! Yes, by His stripes we are healed. Healed of sin sickness. I am blessed by your faith-filled poetry. I know you will do well in the Bible acrostic contest!
All my best,
Sally
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Love this! Yes, by His stripes we are healed. Healed of sin sickness. I am blessed by your faith-filled poetry. I know you will do well in the Bible acrostic contest!
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for the stars and the kind, encouraging words, as well as the wishes.
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You?re welcome!
