Rainbow of Truth
One Line Monostich on Perspective10 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
Wow. . .how true is this statement. Beautiful job (pun intended). Every word counts and makes a bold statement. Nice artwork that compliments the one line poem.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Wow. . .how true is this statement. Beautiful job (pun intended). Every word counts and makes a bold statement. Nice artwork that compliments the one line poem.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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I'm glad this one line poem resonated with you!
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:)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork, June.
-I like the symbolism of color
and the prism in your monostich
to represent how truth
is seen through 'subjective eyes.'
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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-Very nice artwork, June.
-I like the symbolism of color
and the prism in your monostich
to represent how truth
is seen through 'subjective eyes.'
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for your sharing your insightful review.
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You are very welcome, June.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Oh! I rarely give a six to short works, but this really hits the nail on the head so very eloquently!!!! Beautiful and perfect choice of artwork. Great job, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Oh! I rarely give a six to short works, but this really hits the nail on the head so very eloquently!!!! Beautiful and perfect choice of artwork. Great job, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my one line poem - and for the generous stars! So glad it resonated with you.
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My pleasure :-)
Comment from zanya
yes these one line poems in their short format can often illuminate themes as happens here with this reflection around truth and its 'change colors'-nice pic
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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yes these one line poems in their short format can often illuminate themes as happens here with this reflection around truth and its 'change colors'-nice pic
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thank you for dropping to read and review. It's appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one line poem about the truth can be seen differently with different point of view and perspective, the truth get many different facets, from different angles.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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A very well-written one line poem about the truth can be seen differently with different point of view and perspective, the truth get many different facets, from different angles.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to offer your insights on this monostich. I appreciate it.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello June Sargent
I like your One Line Monostich about truth about how --
Truth can often change colors through the prism of subjective eyes.
Yes, I agree that our eyes are windows that make the color of our eyes spark when when we speak the truth
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Hello June Sargent
I like your One Line Monostich about truth about how --
Truth can often change colors through the prism of subjective eyes.
Yes, I agree that our eyes are windows that make the color of our eyes spark when when we speak the truth
Gert
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review my monostich!
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You are so welcome June Sargent
Gert
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You are so welcome June Sargent
Gert
Comment from patcelaw
I really do like the wonderful message of this one-line poem. The artwork you chose to go with it is perfect. Blessings for a good weekend. Patricia
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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I really do like the wonderful message of this one-line poem. The artwork you chose to go with it is perfect. Blessings for a good weekend. Patricia
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read my one line monostich and for the generous stars!
Comment from Joan E.
I read your monostich several times and heard the message that subjectivity can distort truth. Your "prism" metaphor is very effective and reinforced well by the artwork you selected. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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I read your monostich several times and heard the message that subjectivity can distort truth. Your "prism" metaphor is very effective and reinforced well by the artwork you selected. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Yes, these days it's hard to maintain objectivity and most things are now seen from the perspective of what my personal truth is. Thanks for reading and sharing your insights.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So true and we see what we want to believe at times and not what is real, I like the sentiments here June, wise words, good luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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So true and we see what we want to believe at times and not what is real, I like the sentiments here June, wise words, good luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights on my monostich. Always good to hear from you.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello June!
An excellent message is expressed in your well-executed monostitch poem. Truth is a rare commodity in today's society. Subjectivity has taken precedence over objectivity in many instances. How very frightening and sad...
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Hello June!
An excellent message is expressed in your well-executed monostitch poem. Truth is a rare commodity in today's society. Subjectivity has taken precedence over objectivity in many instances. How very frightening and sad...
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights on my monostich.