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Comment from frogbook
Did not know the assignment was imagery but that is just what I had planned to comment on, because it was chuck full. I could almost taste the beer-
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Did not know the assignment was imagery but that is just what I had planned to comment on, because it was chuck full. I could almost taste the beer-
Comment Written 16-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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That?s great because that was the goal! Thanks for your positive review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Ogden
Good, painstaking work! This does, indeed, evoke images of the time of Doyle's immortal Sherlock Holmes. Elementary, my dear Bucketlist!
Warm wishes,
Don
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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Good, painstaking work! This does, indeed, evoke images of the time of Doyle's immortal Sherlock Holmes. Elementary, my dear Bucketlist!
Warm wishes,
Don
Comment Written 16-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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Yes, it evoked nostalgic memories of living ?over the pond?. It was thirsty work too!
Thank you for your supportive review, Ogden
Hugs, Trisha
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You're very welcome, Trisha.
Don
Comment from Lady Jane
First, I love the image of the PUB. I love Sherlock Holmes, so that made this a winner right out of the gate :)
Tongue will register its own memories - this was an interesting inclusion to the write...love it, perfect placement.
Well, I don't drink, but the ambiance and atmosphere would be enough to warrant a visit. Clean, insightful writing, with excellent imagery and presentation. I enjoyed this piece, dear. That opening stanza was a perfect introduction. Keep writing and thanks for sharing such a birds-eye view of this place...Ok, it is real, right? Haha,
janelle
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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First, I love the image of the PUB. I love Sherlock Holmes, so that made this a winner right out of the gate :)
Tongue will register its own memories - this was an interesting inclusion to the write...love it, perfect placement.
Well, I don't drink, but the ambiance and atmosphere would be enough to warrant a visit. Clean, insightful writing, with excellent imagery and presentation. I enjoyed this piece, dear. That opening stanza was a perfect introduction. Keep writing and thanks for sharing such a birds-eye view of this place...Ok, it is real, right? Haha,
janelle
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Hi Janelle - yes it is a real place . I?m glad you enjoyed reading the imagery poem. Thank you very much for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Ben Colder
After reading this I was engulfed with memories of my leave time to London during the fifties. Cold War days. The pubs were delightful and the stories heard of yesterday. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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After reading this I was engulfed with memories of my leave time to London during the fifties. Cold War days. The pubs were delightful and the stories heard of yesterday. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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I?m glad my poem initiated good ones. Thank you for your kind review, Ben,
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent, naturally and modestly expressed this imagery free verse about the changes wish and thoughts for activation in the space for better services; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Excellent, naturally and modestly expressed this imagery free verse about the changes wish and thoughts for activation in the space for better services; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Thanks Al, I appreciated your kind review,
Trisha..
Have a great week
Comment from michaelcahill
WOW! This is such a perfect example of using imagery it should be framed. I truly feel like I've been there and can describe it in detail and recommend the place to my friends. I hope everyone in the club reads it and learns! Yes, this is how to draw a reader in and make them part of your piece. Just loved it. mike
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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WOW! This is such a perfect example of using imagery it should be framed. I truly feel like I've been there and can describe it in detail and recommend the place to my friends. I hope everyone in the club reads it and learns! Yes, this is how to draw a reader in and make them part of your piece. Just loved it. mike
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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I thank you so much. I didn?t think it was that strong, but your review was wonderful, Mike
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from jenintorre
The Sherlock Holmes I imagine is a real pub in London. I have never been there but I felt that I had as your sounds, smells and sights etc.were so descriptive and believable. Nice one. Cheers jen.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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The Sherlock Holmes I imagine is a real pub in London. I have never been there but I felt that I had as your sounds, smells and sights etc.were so descriptive and believable. Nice one. Cheers jen.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for that positive review. Yes, it is a real pub in London. My goal for the imagery trip was met by your kind words
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Anntonette
Wow, this looks like a haunted place somewhere in New Orleans!
I was always fascinated by what they have down in New Orleans :)
You are right, it does trigger my imagination when looking at it.
- Anntonette
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Wow, this looks like a haunted place somewhere in New Orleans!
I was always fascinated by what they have down in New Orleans :)
You are right, it does trigger my imagination when looking at it.
- Anntonette
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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It?s a far place from New Orleans! Thank you for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
