Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I had to read this post when I saw the title, because my forty-two-year-old son just went on a date after a year-long hiatus! Thank you for teaching us about kirigami and some Japanese culture. I liked your clever reference to "Jack and the Beanstalk" and your use of dialogue. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018

:) Thank you! Your poem and review honestly made my weekend, and put a smile on my face. God Bless and many positive energy to you!

-Eu El

reply by Joan E. on 01-Dec-2018

I very much appreciate your warmhearted response. Keep smiling- Joan

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

SHE IS RAPIDLY BECOMING BORED WITH THIS WHOLE SITUATION WITH HIM SHE IS THINKING THIS WAS ALL A BIG MISTAKE TAKING HER HAD AWAY.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

Thank you for the kind stars and for the time for a pleasant review. :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Wonderful conclusion! You already prepared us for a disaster but you made it delightfully hilarious. Obviously, he's nervous and a bit oblivious and she's bored. I especially like how many different and funny ways you described the boredom from " reeking with boredom, " to the "speed of light surpassing sound." Well done. I'm sure the next dating experience improved.
My Japanese neighbor said she hated origami. Lol.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

That's funny! So, did Kaoru. Thank you for the stars. I wanted to detail more in this chapter, but thought less than 900 words was sufficient. Thank you again. I'm glad the comedy was understandable.-Euell