Comment from judiverse

Excellent

That wallaby is a cutie. Makes me wish we had them in the U.S. Fun work with "tale" and "tail." If you have such a long tail, I suppose you can always see it. Cute line about telling his tale upfront. judi

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 12-Oct-2018

You're welcome. judi

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Unlike most of us, he can see his tail at anytime. He enjoys the rare opportunity to actually watch his tail himself. Making it next to impossible for anyone else to tail him. "Just get out of the way and I will do it myself."

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

He may be talking to it

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This would be good for people trying to differentiate between "tell" and "tale" and "tail." I think it would be a fun poem for early readers except for those 'tough' and 'rough' spelled words.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. A clever little poem, told rhyme of the wallaby's tale about his tale. The image is cute. Makes me curious what your next choice of creature to write about will be. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks, Marilyn

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Good one! Gave me quite a laugh. I like telling his tale to his tail. Good rhythm to this piece and good rhyme. One of the best.

Sitting in the basin makes it easier to come face to face with his tail. After all, this is a tough moment. lol

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute story in a poem about the little Wallaby. That was very cute and good words and an adorable picture for the imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks, Teri

reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 11-Oct-2018

you are so welcome!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Okay, now that really brought a chuckle...telling a tale to his tail ... up front! :) Thanx for that smile to start the rainy day off on the right foot, sir! :) :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks, Yvette

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Best Wallaby poem EVER! I like the rhymes, I love that it made sense. You ought to get this one in a contest because it rocks. Great graphic that actually follows the theme of the poem. Great job!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks, Earl

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, this is inventive and hilarious Bill, you must have been inspired by the photo and your words made me laugh, you are such a joker Bill, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Wallabies are just funny.

Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

I think you are really on to something! These wallaby poems are magnificent! Your mind is so creative! Keep up the good work, and I definitely will keep reading :-)

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks, Tina