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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from frogbook
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Now that was certainly some insight into this picture as it certainly was a perfect description. What a cutie and takes us into the inner aggravations of a wallaby.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from nomi338
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Wow! an albino wallaby, her probably should have been hey whitey, not to seem racist or anything like that. She is still quote a sight to see. I never even knew that there was such a thing.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
    White wallabies bleach their hair to be cool
Comment from Teri7
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Wow! I did not know there were some white Wallabys too. This is a very well written poem with great words and a very cute picture to go with your words of mother and baby. so cute in the pouch. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
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Cute picture and your poem interprets that picture well. I didn't know that wallabys could be that flexible. Fun poem full of w-word alliteration and creative spelling to keep the rhyme scheme. Lol.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from damommy
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Cute use of words. You're very creative with the language. lol

The mommy fights the fleas and keeps them off Chloe. Mother and baby are albinos. Is that common? Very interesting.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thanks, da.
    Albinos in all genus
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Lol! Enjoyed the word play on this one -- a fun take almost on the expression of 'boyo' :) :) And albino wallaby...never seen one of those before. :) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you, Yvette
Comment from Earl Corp
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Cool picture, so that is what a wallaby looks like. I see you used creative spelling for annoy and boy. Good attempt at rhyming. Are you trying to make #1 on the poetry list?

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    If you can put up two a day for three months you might make it to number ten (from thirty)
Comment from Tina Crute
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Okay now, you're just having too much fun :-) I'm glad that you are not afraid to play with words, meaning say them in a silly way and hope that we get it. We do definitely get it, and it's very refreshing to see someone having so much childlike fun with poetry. It doesn't have to be serious and somber all the time :-) great job as usual.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Tina. Fun is why we do stuff, right?
Comment from dragonpoet
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Cute poem that describes the picture well. Are doing dialect in the last line? This white wallaby looks like a giant white albino rat.

Keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Followed the rhyme.