God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from Leann DS
This acrostic poem is a very strong expression of your faith to God, and to the word of God. It is expressed uniquely in your own style and with repetition of words for emphasis. I found it to be enjoyable and I especially like the rhyming words you included with the shorter lines then are in your usual writing. I find the shorter lines easier to follow. Thank you for sharing. How does in blessings to you.
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This acrostic poem is a very strong expression of your faith to God, and to the word of God. It is expressed uniquely in your own style and with repetition of words for emphasis. I found it to be enjoyable and I especially like the rhyming words you included with the shorter lines then are in your usual writing. I find the shorter lines easier to follow. Thank you for sharing. How does in blessings to you.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The Poet scores for effort and devotion. To share your poem with your readers you will do well to adapt word structuring in a way to enable them to understand what you are expressing. Writers obscure the story when they drown their thoughts in words that are not commonly understood. "Attract your readers instead of distracting them for want of a dictionary", is something that was drummed into me. It has been a great help. All the best.
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The Poet scores for effort and devotion. To share your poem with your readers you will do well to adapt word structuring in a way to enable them to understand what you are expressing. Writers obscure the story when they drown their thoughts in words that are not commonly understood. "Attract your readers instead of distracting them for want of a dictionary", is something that was drummed into me. It has been a great help. All the best.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
Comment from padumachitta
hello
well an interesting acrosutic, I think it is called.
Certainly gets the point driven home.
Showcases your faith and thoughts on god and his teachings.
May you be well
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hello
well an interesting acrosutic, I think it is called.
Certainly gets the point driven home.
Showcases your faith and thoughts on god and his teachings.
May you be well
Comment Written 17-May-2021
Comment from Sarah Frazier
This is such a beautiful poem. It is well written and an inspiration. I love how you tie everything back to God's words. My favorite section is WORDS because it was a little easier to follow. Overall an excellent piece! Good job you!
Sarah
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This is such a beautiful poem. It is well written and an inspiration. I love how you tie everything back to God's words. My favorite section is WORDS because it was a little easier to follow. Overall an excellent piece! Good job you!
Sarah
Comment Written 17-May-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I love this acrostic poem full of devotion and spiritualism that are shining through the words. We all need to know the word of God. otherwise, how will we know what He wants. We must read the words of God and consume it. Thanks for sharing!
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I love this acrostic poem full of devotion and spiritualism that are shining through the words. We all need to know the word of God. otherwise, how will we know what He wants. We must read the words of God and consume it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 17-May-2021
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a great Acrostic Poem where your beliefs and faith shine through brightly. You can be proud of this piece of work, in my opinion. My favourite line is:
Ever I see me blessed with Thy Gracious Words
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This is a great Acrostic Poem where your beliefs and faith shine through brightly. You can be proud of this piece of work, in my opinion. My favourite line is:
Ever I see me blessed with Thy Gracious Words
Comment Written 17-May-2021
Comment from amahra
This writing was almost like reading the King James Version of the Bible. It's been a long time since I've said Thee and Thou. But I got through it and it was an amazing, though challenging read.
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This writing was almost like reading the King James Version of the Bible. It's been a long time since I've said Thee and Thou. But I got through it and it was an amazing, though challenging read.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi Alcreator,
Your powerful words are unique and a joy to read! I especially found your
fifth stanza very well expressed and original in your message and expression.
Belong to each life worth changing Thy Alpha Swords
Ever I see me blessed with Thy Gracious Words
Love Thy True, Gifted, and Live Words
Only Thou Guide me for man the way to preach
Not to break any but praise before all hearts to reach
Go along explaining Thy Words simply to spread to teach
Great acrostic conveying a deep faith.
Best wishes,
Senyai
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Hi Alcreator,
Your powerful words are unique and a joy to read! I especially found your
fifth stanza very well expressed and original in your message and expression.
Belong to each life worth changing Thy Alpha Swords
Ever I see me blessed with Thy Gracious Words
Love Thy True, Gifted, and Live Words
Only Thou Guide me for man the way to preach
Not to break any but praise before all hearts to reach
Go along explaining Thy Words simply to spread to teach
Great acrostic conveying a deep faith.
Best wishes,
Senyai
Comment Written 16-May-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
A good spiritual acrostic to "Oh my God". Great imagery and visuals; and thank you for your detailed and educational author notes.
Nice presentation and the artwork. Thank you very much for sharing.
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A good spiritual acrostic to "Oh my God". Great imagery and visuals; and thank you for your detailed and educational author notes.
Nice presentation and the artwork. Thank you very much for sharing.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
Comment from ESOSTINE
That was a very lovely piece of poem calling man for total submission to God. The flow was well paced, and I could not fault the style of your writing. Well written dear ALCREATOR. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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That was a very lovely piece of poem calling man for total submission to God. The flow was well paced, and I could not fault the style of your writing. Well written dear ALCREATOR. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
