God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from poesyapprentice
I found this to be a lovely unique style you have penned which flowed well and expressed so much well, but I'm afraid I didn't understand "You whisper me,". Missing "to" or am I missing the meaning? Recommend a comma in "to spread, to teach". The rhyming, although not in a particular scheme, aided the flow of this write and the melodic sound therein. The next to the last stanza was my favorite. Yep, I like your style here. Thank you for sharing.
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I found this to be a lovely unique style you have penned which flowed well and expressed so much well, but I'm afraid I didn't understand "You whisper me,". Missing "to" or am I missing the meaning? Recommend a comma in "to spread, to teach". The rhyming, although not in a particular scheme, aided the flow of this write and the melodic sound therein. The next to the last stanza was my favorite. Yep, I like your style here. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic spiritual poem. The Word of God is very important to us to understand and to believe it, but the most important is to do what the word of God advice us to do.
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A very well-written acrostic spiritual poem. The Word of God is very important to us to understand and to believe it, but the most important is to do what the word of God advice us to do.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from apky
This style you call your own amazes me every time I read your poem. In any case there is no doubt that your work is always original. I particularly got myself totall engrossed in these lines:
Your grand, gracious, good and ground words for mortals living
Open and flow for inspiration by all means expressing
Unto my heart's content, I add no colour of my intent
Rooting the essence, power, glow and glory of Thy Words potent
Keep writing the way you do.
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This style you call your own amazes me every time I read your poem. In any case there is no doubt that your work is always original. I particularly got myself totall engrossed in these lines:
Your grand, gracious, good and ground words for mortals living
Open and flow for inspiration by all means expressing
Unto my heart's content, I add no colour of my intent
Rooting the essence, power, glow and glory of Thy Words potent
Keep writing the way you do.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Ulla
Hi Ald, I liked the acrostic writing. You did that very well. However, I don't know about the rest of it. It all sounds a bit too religious to me. I don't know, this site didn't seem to be full of missionaries. It's a writing site for God sake! Yeah, I could stop reviewing, but I need the phony dollars to promote my own work. Ulla:)
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Hi Ald, I liked the acrostic writing. You did that very well. However, I don't know about the rest of it. It all sounds a bit too religious to me. I don't know, this site didn't seem to be full of missionaries. It's a writing site for God sake! Yeah, I could stop reviewing, but I need the phony dollars to promote my own work. Ulla:)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, Oh My God I..., which follows the vertical theme, OH MY GOD I BELONG TO YOUR WORDS, sums up a life devoted to spreading the love of God throughout the world. Good idea.
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This acrostic poem, Oh My God I..., which follows the vertical theme, OH MY GOD I BELONG TO YOUR WORDS, sums up a life devoted to spreading the love of God throughout the world. Good idea.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from tfawcus
Your poem starts with the ubiquitous exclamation of the masses, so commonplace these days that it has lost its real meaning. Here, though, you use it in its proper sense. How appropriate, in a poem extolling the virtue of the Word of God. In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was God.
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Your poem starts with the ubiquitous exclamation of the masses, so commonplace these days that it has lost its real meaning. Here, though, you use it in its proper sense. How appropriate, in a poem extolling the virtue of the Word of God. In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was God.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Sally Law
This is outstanding acrostic poetry! I regret I do not have a six for this fine piece of work. I love God and His word so much! It is a joy to see that you do too.
All my best,
Sally
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This is outstanding acrostic poetry! I regret I do not have a six for this fine piece of work. I love God and His word so much! It is a joy to see that you do too.
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from rspoet
Hello Alcreator,
This is a very fine acrostic poem written in your own style
Perhaps your best poem that I have read
Your message is clear and well expressed
and the acrostic reads quite smoothly
The dedication needs a small edit:
I teach God[�¢??]s Words I belong; an Acrostic poem [God's}
Excellent picture to match
Very well done
Best wishes to you
Robert
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Hello Alcreator,
This is a very fine acrostic poem written in your own style
Perhaps your best poem that I have read
Your message is clear and well expressed
and the acrostic reads quite smoothly
The dedication needs a small edit:
I teach God[�¢??]s Words I belong; an Acrostic poem [God's}
Excellent picture to match
Very well done
Best wishes to you
Robert
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from His Grayness
I found this work to be exceptionally well done and certainly deserving the sixth star I have not to offer! My sincere and genuine thanks for a truly lovely work and my hopes to see more from this excellent poet soon! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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I found this work to be exceptionally well done and certainly deserving the sixth star I have not to offer! My sincere and genuine thanks for a truly lovely work and my hopes to see more from this excellent poet soon! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi sis a very finemAcrostic style poem. Your support for your theme is spot on and resonates thoughtout the verse. I find it uplifting and a testimony to your faith. Well done.
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Hi sis a very finemAcrostic style poem. Your support for your theme is spot on and resonates thoughtout the verse. I find it uplifting and a testimony to your faith. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
