God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from kiwijenny
I love your acrostic poem, o My God I Belong to your words...
I belong there too
Well penned poem and two in one ...I like the alliteration...why kin(s) just kin would suffice
God bless
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I love your acrostic poem, o My God I Belong to your words...
I belong there too
Well penned poem and two in one ...I like the alliteration...why kin(s) just kin would suffice
God bless
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from WildWithWords
Lovely acrostic poem with some odd structures in place in terms of wording, but the message is a clear one regardless. I see you even found space for alliteration in the second last stanza.
Bill (WildWithWords)
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Lovely acrostic poem with some odd structures in place in terms of wording, but the message is a clear one regardless. I see you even found space for alliteration in the second last stanza.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from flylikeaneagle
I really like the acrostic points. My fav is the last--
Dance in muse, singing the note, melody of Thy Words in their kin(s)
Spread words as my assigned duty in our and my kin(s)
We can enjoy our private time together with God. We can fellowship
with people like us and spread the Good News outside the church.
Well written. Guide me Lord! flylikeaneagle
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I really like the acrostic points. My fav is the last--
Dance in muse, singing the note, melody of Thy Words in their kin(s)
Spread words as my assigned duty in our and my kin(s)
We can enjoy our private time together with God. We can fellowship
with people like us and spread the Good News outside the church.
Well written. Guide me Lord! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you made an acrostic poem that is also the same as your first line. Also, I really like that you say that "I belong to Your Words" because we belong to Him and no the other way around.
One comment: if you are going to use the King James English of using "thou" and "thee" and "thy," the acrostic line should be "Thy words" instead of "Your words."
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I like how you made an acrostic poem that is also the same as your first line. Also, I really like that you say that "I belong to Your Words" because we belong to Him and no the other way around.
One comment: if you are going to use the King James English of using "thou" and "thee" and "thy," the acrostic line should be "Thy words" instead of "Your words."
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from tbacha58
I am back and i still remember you the one writer who believes and dwells on remaining the same forever. Beautiful writ loved the combination of the page set up, Bless you Terry xoxo
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I am back and i still remember you the one writer who believes and dwells on remaining the same forever. Beautiful writ loved the combination of the page set up, Bless you Terry xoxo
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An uplifting acrostic filled with faithful words and praise, to be empowered by your beliefs is true devotion and your poem is a tribute to that, love Dolly x
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An uplifting acrostic filled with faithful words and praise, to be empowered by your beliefs is true devotion and your poem is a tribute to that, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from karenina
Elegant acrostic of not just one word but eight! Faith is an inspiration in itself and you have quite eloquently expressed love of God and His Word throughout this piece. I stand with you in your beliefs and congratulate you on a fine piece of writing.
Karenina
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Elegant acrostic of not just one word but eight! Faith is an inspiration in itself and you have quite eloquently expressed love of God and His Word throughout this piece. I stand with you in your beliefs and congratulate you on a fine piece of writing.
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Raul1
Very inspiring poem. I love having conversations with God. All of his talks are super friendly. He is always with us, as you said in your poem. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
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Very inspiring poem. I love having conversations with God. All of his talks are super friendly. He is always with us, as you said in your poem. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from royowen
Well done with this acrostic,, well crafted and conceived, the writing shows and reveals a propensity to depend on the lord your God for sustenance in all ways depending on a gratitude and joy for His provision, well done Blessings, Roy
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Well done with this acrostic,, well crafted and conceived, the writing shows and reveals a propensity to depend on the lord your God for sustenance in all ways depending on a gratitude and joy for His provision, well done Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from chrissy8
Great job on this acrostic poem, just in time for Sunday! An uplifting write to all of us Christians, for sure. Great picture to accompany your poem. I really can't add or detract anything as this was really well done! Thanks for sharing this just in time for worship!
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Great job on this acrostic poem, just in time for Sunday! An uplifting write to all of us Christians, for sure. Great picture to accompany your poem. I really can't add or detract anything as this was really well done! Thanks for sharing this just in time for worship!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
