God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, interesting and creative.
The reader thought about the Words of God and thought about God's
love for us. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, interesting and creative.
The reader thought about the Words of God and thought about God's
love for us. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
Comment from poetwatch
Very good Al. I read it a few times. I understand the message. This line "Only I see Thy Lights upon edges of the swords/Do show my belonging to a few of Thy Infinite Words" I love, for I translate it as (All I see is war, there is no peace on earth, for no one wants to share God's words.)
Good poem Al thanks for sharing.
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Very good Al. I read it a few times. I understand the message. This line "Only I see Thy Lights upon edges of the swords/Do show my belonging to a few of Thy Infinite Words" I love, for I translate it as (All I see is war, there is no peace on earth, for no one wants to share God's words.)
Good poem Al thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
Comment from Ricky1024
This is Well written rich and Theme and Imagery.
It Flowed and flooded will.
It read well, as well.
There were no Grammar issues.
As well...
Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Objectiveand Adjective Contents were both excellent and exceptiona
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Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky1024
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This is Well written rich and Theme and Imagery.
It Flowed and flooded will.
It read well, as well.
There were no Grammar issues.
As well...
Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Objectiveand Adjective Contents were both excellent and exceptiona
L
Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
Comment from gene roush
This post really struck a chord with me.
I especially liked the line;
"Words per Thy Will, Wish and Plan to help make prayers of Thy children"
I wish that every one could view the world with this kind of Faith.
With it, humanity would prevail over greed and war.
Thanks for sharing. I'm going for a walk to contemplate the wonderful gift of life.
Gene
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This post really struck a chord with me.
I especially liked the line;
"Words per Thy Will, Wish and Plan to help make prayers of Thy children"
I wish that every one could view the world with this kind of Faith.
With it, humanity would prevail over greed and war.
Thanks for sharing. I'm going for a walk to contemplate the wonderful gift of life.
Gene
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
Comment from Earl Corp
I coulldnt figure out what was so different about this poem until I read your notes at the bottom- no punctuation! I like spiritual poetry bu not free verse so much. Nice job
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I coulldnt figure out what was so different about this poem until I read your notes at the bottom- no punctuation! I like spiritual poetry bu not free verse so much. Nice job
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
Comment from LIJ Red
An interesting acrostic faith poem. The syntax is a bit hard to follow at times, but the overall message comes through loud and clear. An excellent post...
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An interesting acrostic faith poem. The syntax is a bit hard to follow at times, but the overall message comes through loud and clear. An excellent post...
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
Comment from rjuselius
this is an exquisite piece of poetry dear alcreator! I love your personification and your free verse works well. rather challenging though.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
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this is an exquisite piece of poetry dear alcreator! I love your personification and your free verse works well. rather challenging though.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
Comment from Tina Crute
There is something very special and reverent about this poem. I think the old language style makes it so much more authentic.
"Unto my heart's content, I add no colour of my intent" is my favorite line. I think that is the essence of the poem, that you do not want to impose your understanding on His words, but want Him to speak to you, His truth. Without punctuation, I had a bit of trouble, but it was worth the trouble.
Very deep. Very good!
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There is something very special and reverent about this poem. I think the old language style makes it so much more authentic.
"Unto my heart's content, I add no colour of my intent" is my favorite line. I think that is the essence of the poem, that you do not want to impose your understanding on His words, but want Him to speak to you, His truth. Without punctuation, I had a bit of trouble, but it was worth the trouble.
Very deep. Very good!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
A beautiful acrostic AC. Your style almost punctuation free clearly states your beliefs and choice through your words.
A pleasure to read and review today. :)
Gloria
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A beautiful acrostic AC. Your style almost punctuation free clearly states your beliefs and choice through your words.
A pleasure to read and review today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I'm sure God is very pleased when He read your
acrostic poem. What I liked is how you told us here on FS Listen to God is saying to His words
Gert
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I'm sure God is very pleased when He read your
acrostic poem. What I liked is how you told us here on FS Listen to God is saying to His words
Gert
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
