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God Omniscient Deeds

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Comment from TPAC
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I found this write original in its composition, filled with many thought-provoking aspects appealing to its reader, a spiritual journey rooted on beliefs. A pleasing conveyance in my opinion.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

Comment from Ben Colder
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Sweet in my mouth. Come taste of the Lord. You did well with sharing the Lord. And the Word was made flesh and dwelt among us. My blessings to you. There is no fault in the Word.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

Comment from J. Dennis
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I read and reread your poem. I also try to gather information from whatever you share with us.
As I read that this was an acrostic poem, many things became clearer. Your notes that were follow-ups were so helpful also.
Your work has the feel of what you write: listening and reading Gods words, and thinking the power they hold. You follow the message and perhaps want to share/teach to others. In this day, that would be a big job.
Thank you for writing and sharing this poem. This is a good poem to read and reflect on.
Have a good day.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow! Alliterations and professions of faith all combine to make a spectacular write here -- so many layers contained that I've read it through twice and have found a bit of different feel each time! ;) Thank you for sharing! :) ;)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with your prayer poem, Dr Al. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the rhymes, the smooth flow, and the great message. Your words are such that all need to hear and believe. thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

Comment from Galactia
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Hi

Excellent written poem reflecting your faith in God and his words of which you consume as you read and abide by. Poem flowed well, your message and you can feel the love and devotion you have for your God through your poem.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

Comment from Krissy Johnson
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This is a beautiful spiritual poem strongly structured on the word of God. Excellently written and flows with faith and emotional meaning of trust in an unwavering faith in your Lord. Very encouraging and a reminder of how powerful the word of God truly is :)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Inspired and empowering poetry! "...I see Thy lights upon edges of the swords" one of the many truths spoken of in this write. Reminds me of Hebrews 4:12. The Words of God are life truth, love...being multiplied because of their creative power! Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

Comment from susand3022
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Hi, I can see where you were going with this, it has a lot of potential. I do wish I didn't have to work quite so hard to read it though. the YOUR stanza is nice, it's much more clear than the others and much easier to read. I did read the notes below first and looked up words I didn't know, only a couple, but it was still work to discern your meaning sometimes and I have to admit that it sometimes eluded me altogether. I think with a little less fanfare over fancy wording you can have a great poem that all can enjoy. Susan

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

Comment from Jaye Bennett
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You poem reads beautifully. I, however, have had some trouble following the meaning of what you have written. I guess I just expect the words to be in a different order to make sense to me. Sorry about that. Like I said, it does read beautifully.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018