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God Omniscient Deeds

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Comment from Mastery
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Excellent writing, author. You have a tendency to renew my faith in humanity as a whole.

"Those I meet, relate, and contact I scribe expressing words
Only as Thou Enkindle, Empower my tongue with Thy Words."

Bless you, fine job. Bob

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2018

Comment from Heather Knight
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It would be great if we could all live in harmony listening to the word of God, no matter what religion we belong to. Unfortunately, it is not always the case.
Very original style. Quite unique.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2018

Comment from countess gram
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Your faith in God is a remarkable gift and it shines through your well chosen words,giving this poem life. God loves us and guides us through life if we let Him and promised eternal life. It is our job to love Him in return. Your words flow well and create a sense of yearning for more of God's words. Well done !!!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

Comment from kahpot
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Yes an excellent read and Acrostic poem and thank you for the notes, I read this first wich helped tremendously along with the great artwork, very well done, a wonderful Acrostic****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

Comment from Monique Cummings
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This poem is beautiful. I love the message and I think that this poem is a wonderful example of how poetry expresses all kinds of emotions and can genres.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

Comment from Shanbreen
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What a wonderful expression of faith in God. You have some wonderful lines. Two that caught my eyes are:

I find, I feel, I believe, I too, per Thy Will belong to Thy Words

Unto my heart's content, I add no colour of my intent

Simply wonderful. A true expression of the heart.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

Comment from rhonnie69
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HELLO ALCREATOR LITT DEAR: This work speaks of the word of God. I believe that every word of God is pure: He is a shield unto them that put their trust in Him. I say to God: "Thy word is truth." Thank you for sharing, Alcreator Litt Dear. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

Comment from Carolyn Reaves
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Very nice writing about how God and your relationship with Him so real to you. I appreciate the depth you have gone to explain each word that gives more meaning to your writing.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

Comment from Sanku
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What a long acrostic poem!. It must have taken a lot of trouble for you to write like this .Your idea is very idealistic. I wish people would feel really like that.ome of your lines have impressive alliteration

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

Comment from nassus1957
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I agree mankind belong to God's words. The words in the Bible in fact is one way of communicating with the :Lord. If we try to seek the Lord's presence, all we have to do is read His words. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018