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God Omniscient Deeds

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Comment from Patty Palmer
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The words written in the bible are to be heard by every person. Reach down and hold those words to take with you when you go. This is part of what I feel you were saying.
God bless!
Patty

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019

Comment from Spangle
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You have expressed yourself very well in this spiritual poem. Your powerful message involves both reading and sharing God's Word with others. The picture you chose is perfect for your writing.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019

Comment from Kamisah Karim
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The words of God from the sacred books for any religion are what we should abide too. True as you have mentioned in this poem.A little too high level for me to really grasp the full meaning but I understand the teachings of God, of not commiting a sin and in spreading the teachings and practice to our youngs.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This poem is very profound. It reminds the reader that man does not need to embellish God's words, but we need to pray for the ability to spread His
word in a loving way.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

Comment from robyn corum
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ALD,

I think this is the first poem of yours I have read in a LONG TIME that has not been in a contest! Wow.

I like the theme of this poem - which seems to be about submersing oneself in the words of God. I like it! Thank you!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

Comment from misscookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem it is a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to the last and how your words flow and speech truth
thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

Comment from Gail Denham
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Another reminder poem of how we should relate to God - how we need to invite Him into everything. I remember stories from long ago "what would you do if Jesus came to dinner - would it change anything?" I guess it would for sure.
Good poem.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2019

Comment from dmt1967
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I do not think this is as good as the rest I have read today. It is very repetitive and, in my opinion, this makes the poem jumpy and hard to read. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2019

Comment from Janet Foor
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God's Words are precious to the believer and you have written this acrostic with the love of those words beautifully.

Very nicely done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2019

Comment from WryWriter
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I found your first line powerful and is my favorite line. And it is the title and Acrostic! The Words of God are living Words that speak to each individual. Spread the Word!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2019