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Comment from Brett Matthew West
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A poem, or other form of writing, should not have to rely on a picture to invoke the
intended meaning.

In L4 ringed should be rung.

Several words capitalized that should not be. This distracts from the essence of the piece.

 Comment Written 18-May-2021


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    Thanks for your wisdom.
Comment from Boogienights
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I admire your deep faith and commitment in God's words. I wish I could feel that way, and while I believe in God's existence, I have many questions. Beautifully written, thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-May-2021

Comment from Bloomer Burbs
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Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR

With me not being a religious man I found it difficult to fully grasp to true meaning of your acrostic. Saying that it is good to be educated, to get someone else's point of view.

Thank you for sharing. Take care, Pete

 Comment Written 18-May-2021

Comment from Possummagic
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Beautifully and spiritually crafted words. Meaningful and in depth, the message of our commitment to Gods words and His commitment in his love and tolerance of us is evident in your words. I loved this.

 Comment Written 18-May-2021

Comment from jake cosmos aller
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a great acrostic poem about God and the nature of his words for humanity and what it all means. While I am not religious, I can appreciate a religious poem and this is well done.

 Comment Written 18-May-2021

Comment from Shreyamsi(Saria)
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A great Acrostic poem! the artwork very well goes along with the poem. Your poem flowed very smoothly. Words are extremely well chosen and beautifully penned. Such a powerful message too!

 Comment Written 18-May-2021

Comment from TheTurtleDude
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Such profound words! It's such a powerful message too. Great acrostic poem about faith. My favorite was definitely the words. Overall great poem!
Best Wishes,
TheTurtleDude

 Comment Written 17-May-2021

Comment from pharp
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"Oh My God, I Belong To Your Words," is a powerful message, and your faith shines through in every word. You did an exceptional job in the penning of this faith-filled acoustic poem. This has been a very insightful read that will keep my heart and mind in God's Holy words. Thanks for sharing.

Blessings...Portia

 Comment Written 17-May-2021

Comment from mobileliz
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Alcreator has done a good job in delivering a good message. He is correct in that the picture is not only appropriate, but also a very good choice. The poem is not geared toward one denomination or religion, but toward God and Christianity

 Comment Written 17-May-2021

Comment from Dr. Nad
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O My God I...... Is an acrostic poem that speaks not only to God and for God but to the reader concerning God. Your admonition to us is well taken. Listen to God in all he says. Attempt to follow him with all your heart. Good advice. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.

 Comment Written 17-May-2021