Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Hello there, this is an excellent 5-7-5 on how the light shines perspective on life. Great use of the personification, slipping through the cracks showing the way.
Nicely done, Good luck! ~Kerry

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018

Thanks Kerry!
The first line is my favourite too..I have had other posters say they liked it too.

The source of light in poem has more than one interpretation ..so it should appeal to a wider group of people .

Thanks for the shiny 5 star vote !

I have this gut feeling the poem will do well in the contest ..I hope so because it's one of my all time favourites .

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 10-Oct-2018

My pleasure, Amica Mia, and congratulations, it did do well!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Sunlight is rightly personified, as it tells the truth, what it does and how it shines perspectives of one's life and how it shows everyone the way; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018

Thank you Alcreator for reviewing and voting my poem...

the poem has many interpretations .. You see the light as God's that offers us direction towards the right path .

I particularily I like this poem , glad you liked it too