My Childhood Award
I Remember contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from mkflood
Interesting story. I do thank you for selecting my work. The scene you selecting is from my illustrated music video title "Rolling in the Deep" now showing in YouTube.com under "MKFlood Presents". Check it out when you get a chance. Again great job on the story and thanks again.. MKFlood
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Interesting story. I do thank you for selecting my work. The scene you selecting is from my illustrated music video title "Rolling in the Deep" now showing in YouTube.com under "MKFlood Presents". Check it out when you get a chance. Again great job on the story and thanks again.. MKFlood
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Dear mkflood, Thank you for your comments and rating and artwork. Dove
Comment from trailblazer101
I liked this especially for the honesty of youth unsure and yet willing to try. I think we can all remember the times when it appeared too hard. I cant even visualize something like playing like exodus one of my favourites.
I give this one a fiver for good tight writing and word choices.
Now i have to download exodus ..... Dont have that one on this new phone. Thanks a lot!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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I liked this especially for the honesty of youth unsure and yet willing to try. I think we can all remember the times when it appeared too hard. I cant even visualize something like playing like exodus one of my favourites.
I give this one a fiver for good tight writing and word choices.
Now i have to download exodus ..... Dont have that one on this new phone. Thanks a lot!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Dear trailblazer101, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove
Comment from yuccabarry1
When the teacher first handed me this piece, I saw all the above the staff notes, and exclaimed, "I can't play this!"
I am not sure what you are trying to say here? "I saw all the staff notes"
I played the violin and viola from the 5th grade thru highschool. It was a passion at the beginning but I never had the talent needed to succeed. If you love it and it moves you the same as your poems then start again!
Great story, even with the small error. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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When the teacher first handed me this piece, I saw all the above the staff notes, and exclaimed, "I can't play this!"
I am not sure what you are trying to say here? "I saw all the staff notes"
I played the violin and viola from the 5th grade thru highschool. It was a passion at the beginning but I never had the talent needed to succeed. If you love it and it moves you the same as your poems then start again!
Great story, even with the small error. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Dear yuccabarry1, Thank you for your comments and rating. Thanks for your good luck wishes. I will go in and edit the error. If you have ever read music, there are high notes that are lines above the staff, the higher the line, the higher your right hand goes on the piano, an octave or two above. Dove
Comment from donette1914
very nice of learning to play the piano and all the fun you had
very believable and heartfelt
well chosen words you used
very nice photo
I hope the best in the contest
it was a pleasure
donette1914 oct 5th 2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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very nice of learning to play the piano and all the fun you had
very believable and heartfelt
well chosen words you used
very nice photo
I hope the best in the contest
it was a pleasure
donette1914 oct 5th 2018
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Dear donette1914, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove
