At Rope's End
It is there, that answers may be found...10 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
I have been arrogant enough in the past review senryu with practically no knowledge of the finer points of the form, so a precedent has been set. Three lines, five, seven and five syllables, and a lucid thought about human emotions. Excellent.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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I have been arrogant enough in the past review senryu with practically no knowledge of the finer points of the form, so a precedent has been set. Three lines, five, seven and five syllables, and a lucid thought about human emotions. Excellent.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Okay, this was one of the most smile-inducing (yeah, I chuckled out loud, too!) reviews I've received in a while -- thank you for that, LlJ Red, and thank you for stopping by the read and review! :) Have a great weekend! :) Yvette [can sign my name now that the contest is over] :) :)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
At the end of my rope. That is such an interesting metaphor. Which end are people talking about. I guess it's like the glass half full metaphor. If they are talking about the end that at the end closest to the destination or is the person climbing down and they're are at the end of their rope and there is still at least 20 feet of rope needed to complete the mission. Facing eternity, I found a more secure hold on my rope. This was fun to explore. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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At the end of my rope. That is such an interesting metaphor. Which end are people talking about. I guess it's like the glass half full metaphor. If they are talking about the end that at the end closest to the destination or is the person climbing down and they're are at the end of their rope and there is still at least 20 feet of rope needed to complete the mission. Facing eternity, I found a more secure hold on my rope. This was fun to explore. Well thought out.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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So glad this was a good adventure in 'mind exploration' for you, Liz -- always appreciate your stopping in for the read and review! :) Have a great weekend! :) Yvette [can sign my name now that the contest is over!]
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, At Rope's End, assembled with a 5-7-5 framework, suggests the ironic truth that we can't really connect with faith until we desperately need it.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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This senryu, At Rope's End, assembled with a 5-7-5 framework, suggests the ironic truth that we can't really connect with faith until we desperately need it.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Thanx for stopping by for the read and review, Bill -- always appreciated! :) Lovely that this spoke to you -- Have a great weekend! :) Yvette [can sign my name now that the contest is over!]
Comment from poesyapprentice
Yes, I imagine it definitely can be for some. Syllable count is correct. Because of the single complete thought it reminded me of a one liner, although in 5-7-5 form. I do like that the phrases per line were complete instead of dividing a phrase in the middle and carrying it over. Thank you for promoting your entry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Yes, I imagine it definitely can be for some. Syllable count is correct. Because of the single complete thought it reminded me of a one liner, although in 5-7-5 form. I do like that the phrases per line were complete instead of dividing a phrase in the middle and carrying it over. Thank you for promoting your entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thanx for stopping by for the read and review, poesyapprentice -- always appreciated! :) Lovely that this spoke to you -- Have a great weekend! :)
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You too!
Comment from donette1914
very emotional at one's end and the hope for the future
very believable and heartfelt
well chosen words you used
very nice photo
I hope the best in the contest
it was a pleasure
donette1914 oct 4th 2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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very emotional at one's end and the hope for the future
very believable and heartfelt
well chosen words you used
very nice photo
I hope the best in the contest
it was a pleasure
donette1914 oct 4th 2018
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thanx for stopping by for the read and review, Donette -- always appreciated! :) Lovely that this spoke to you -- Have a great weekend! :)
Comment from rspoet
This is an interesting unusual 5-7-5 senryu for the contest
Sometimes it takes extreme circumstance to reveal the way forward
There is a way, if we can only see it
Well done
Best wishes to you
RS
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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This is an interesting unusual 5-7-5 senryu for the contest
Sometimes it takes extreme circumstance to reveal the way forward
There is a way, if we can only see it
Well done
Best wishes to you
RS
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thanx for stopping by for the read and review, Robert -- always appreciated! :) Lovely that this spoke to you -- Have a great weekend! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we reach the end of our rope and hange on, it is then that all falls into place and the only climb is up, this is our life line, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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When we reach the end of our rope and hange on, it is then that all falls into place and the only climb is up, this is our life line, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thanx for stopping by for the read and review, Dolly -- always appreciated! :) Lovely that this spoke to you -- Have a great weekend! :)
Comment from Sally Law
Very well done and I really liked your picture and formatting. It was a short poem but no word wasted. Things do reveal themselves and God is seen more clearly at the ropes'end.
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Very well done and I really liked your picture and formatting. It was a short poem but no word wasted. Things do reveal themselves and God is seen more clearly at the ropes'end.
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thanx for stopping by for the read and review, Sally -- always appreciated! :) Lovely that this spoke to you -- Have a great weekend! :)
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You?re very welcome!
Comment from Shanbreen
Wow! Generally, senryu is supposed to be fun and not so philosophical -- unlike a haiku, but this is so profound and quite uplifting. Love it. Best for the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Wow! Generally, senryu is supposed to be fun and not so philosophical -- unlike a haiku, but this is so profound and quite uplifting. Love it. Best for the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thanx for stopping by for the read and review, Shanbreen -- always appreciated! :) Lovely that this spoke to you -- Have a great weekend! :)
Comment from Brian Forsyth
I like it. It makes you think. And, you nailed the syllables. Also, you found a graphic which actually worked well with your poem. I'm not quite sure what it means, but it is good that it could mean several different things.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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I like it. It makes you think. And, you nailed the syllables. Also, you found a graphic which actually worked well with your poem. I'm not quite sure what it means, but it is good that it could mean several different things.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thanx for stopping by for the read and review, Brian -- always appreciated! :) Multiple interpretations are always welcome -- Have a great weekend! :)
