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Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Memory Imagery "Eclectic style
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a lovely and invigorating read to jumpstart the weekend!! :) :) Your imagery and emotional phrasings are just perfect to convey the feel of the beach at all of its different incarnations throughout the day! :) :) Thank you so very much for sharing that sunshine and joy with all of us today! :) :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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What a lovely and invigorating read to jumpstart the weekend!! :) :) Your imagery and emotional phrasings are just perfect to convey the feel of the beach at all of its different incarnations throughout the day! :) :) Thank you so very much for sharing that sunshine and joy with all of us today! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Yvette, you?re very kind! Thank you for your supportive and complimentary review. I?m glad you got enjoyment while reading my experiences.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Illumination
I feel calm and relaxed after reading that. I can feel the sand in my toes and the sun on my neck. Your writing style is right up my street. I love it. Nothing to add here but I've certainly taken something away. Thank you and well done.
Stay Gold
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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I feel calm and relaxed after reading that. I can feel the sand in my toes and the sun on my neck. Your writing style is right up my street. I love it. Nothing to add here but I've certainly taken something away. Thank you and well done.
Stay Gold
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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It seems wonderful to know the imagery in my prose met its goal. Thank you so much for your complimentary review and valued six stars
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I wouldn't call this poetry. It's prose in the wrong category. Maybe I'm wrong, but I don't think so. If it were a contest entry it would be rejected. Tell me if you disagree.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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I wouldn't call this poetry. It's prose in the wrong category. Maybe I'm wrong, but I don't think so. If it were a contest entry it would be rejected. Tell me if you disagree.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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I agree with you 100%. I?m going to backtrack and see if I used the incorrect template. Thanks very much........
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
A wonderful descriptive poem about the seaside, your words read so smoothly and your imagery was superb, you were even kind enough to describe myself.....white bread in a sea of toast......it was like looking in a mirror....excellent
Mitchell
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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A wonderful descriptive poem about the seaside, your words read so smoothly and your imagery was superb, you were even kind enough to describe myself.....white bread in a sea of toast......it was like looking in a mirror....excellent
Mitchell
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Mitchell, haha I?m a Limey, so I am also a piece of white toast ! That?s not such a liberty to say that. Thank you very much for your complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from country ranch writer
The beach offers peace an tranquility and is so soothing to one's soul.It is nice to be able to sit and reflect on one's life and hopes and dreams down by the waterside.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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The beach offers peace an tranquility and is so soothing to one's soul.It is nice to be able to sit and reflect on one's life and hopes and dreams down by the waterside.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Yes, the natural elements can be calming. It?s a good place for putting things into perspective. Thanks for your /kind review. I know how busy you are
Hugs, Trisha
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the visual imagery from memories of living of a girl and how she feels about Nature and surroundings affect her life; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks about the visual imagery from memories of living of a girl and how she feels about Nature and surroundings affect her life; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Alcreator! Your positive review was gratefully received.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You took me to another place here Trisha and I enjoyed the journey, a well written piece and I especially liked:
'Some of the Germans boasted firm bodies, others wore size 5 swimwear trying to support size 18 figures. There would also be the English who looked like white bread in a sea of toast."
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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You took me to another place here Trisha and I enjoyed the journey, a well written piece and I especially liked:
'Some of the Germans boasted firm bodies, others wore size 5 swimwear trying to support size 18 figures. There would also be the English who looked like white bread in a sea of toast."
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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We like the same thoughts! I can be ?cheeky? because I?m English white bread as well! Thank you for your supportive review.
Hugs, Trisha