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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Ulla
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Hahahahaha, Great play with words, Bill. I liked it very much.I've actually come across the koala bear in its natural habitat. Quit a little fellow. Loved you Pranka. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from frogbook
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Ah yes, now that you mention this I do remember but to most of us he will remain an honorary member of the bear family...and a cute one too.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
    Still cute.
Comment from judiverse
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Cleverly handled with the pun with "bear" and "bare." Koalas are kind of cute. I have no idea what kind of temperament they have. "Ruin your bruin" is interesting rhyme. They always do things a bit differently in Australia. The marsupials are proof. judi

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
    I told my granddaughter that her stuffed koala toy was a marsupial and not a bear. Her response was to smile and say, ?Oh Grandpa. Your so funny.?
reply by judiverse on 03-Oct-2018
    You're welcome. Wonder what meaning she read into marsupial? judi
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
    She's three, so Mars...soup...daffodil
reply by judiverse on 03-Oct-2018
    It's amazing how quickly they can learn at that age. Sometimes it take me forever to pick up something new. judi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A great play on words and these are cuddly kind of bears that are closer to everyone's hearts! Although in reality they are just as dangerous as the standard bears, I enjoyed your clever words Bill, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for letting us know the "bare bear facts." I don't know why we call them "koala bears." Their behavior in life differs quite a lot. I like your "bruin" and "ruin" internal rhyme.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from nomi338
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Oh man, that is one mean looking mug, if I ever saw one before. Wonder who took away his Koala nuts. or are the those the nuts he is upset about? Either he does not appear to be too happy about having his picture taken or drawn or whatever. man, everyone's a critic these days.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thanks, nomi
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A fun little bear piece with the newly-added sprinkling of word play -- really adds a wonderful flavor to your collection. :) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Yvette, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from Nanny 6
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Ha... I am so disappointed LOL this was too cute. I enjoyed reading the poem and getting their BARE fax ; )
What a fun poem... I sure do enjoy your style of poetry
Judy

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Judy
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written and very good Pranka poem about the Koala bear. I had no idea it was not really a bear! I learn something new every day. Thanks for sharing with us all! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL, Love it. the bare bear facts! We have a weird language, don't we? I'm glad I'm not a foreigner trying to understand the English language, I'd never learn it! lol. I love the picture, and I love your poem. Another bear poem, or at least a non-bear poem! :) Sandra x

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Sandra, for the nice review. Bill