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collection of poems and short stories

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written four-line poem a obout true love that keeps giving and weaves blankets of blessings together with warm hearts and respect between two lovers.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thanks for the insightful review Sandra. I guess people feel they are "helping God" with their prayers. Cheers, j
Comment from Bill Schott
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This four-line poem, Blanket Blessing, brings us all back to the bedside for a little nighttime prayer. Then I lay me down to sleep while my mom asked that I live through the night.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Sounds ominous now that I think about it. I think it brings comfort to our moms to 'help' God along with our safety and blessings. Thanks for the review, cheers, j