A Busy Mom's Unspoken Fear
In that moment, the world stops turning...15 total reviews
Comment from Kelly Grim
Scary!!!! You set a happy carefree scene with a happy toddler throwing a pacifier, and then he's suddenly gone! Every mother's worst nightmare, I imagine! Nice story and a good entry into this contest! Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Scary!!!! You set a happy carefree scene with a happy toddler throwing a pacifier, and then he's suddenly gone! Every mother's worst nightmare, I imagine! Nice story and a good entry into this contest! Well done!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Searching for a fearful subject (in only 50 words), I couldn't think of anything more scary than this situation. I'm glad you found the fear in this write, Kelly, and I thank you for stopping in for the quick read and review today! :) :) Find some special time just for you this week -- you deserve it! :) :)
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent flash fiction story and entry for the contest
a good warning, too.
This can happen so quickly it's hard to believe, even to those who are cautious.
Well written
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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This is an excellent flash fiction story and entry for the contest
a good warning, too.
This can happen so quickly it's hard to believe, even to those who are cautious.
Well written
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Searching for a fearful subject (in only 50 words), I couldn't think of anything more scary than this situation. I'm glad you found the fear in this write, Robert, and I thank you for stopping in for the quick read and review today! :) :) Find some special time just for you this week -- you deserve it! :) :)
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent. As the father of two grown boys, I shudder when I read this. A kidnapped child would be like pulling a vital organ from your body. My heart goes out to any parent and child who have experienced this. Hugh
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Excellent. As the father of two grown boys, I shudder when I read this. A kidnapped child would be like pulling a vital organ from your body. My heart goes out to any parent and child who have experienced this. Hugh
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Searching for a fearful subject (in only 50 words), I couldn't think of anything more scary than this situation. I'm glad you found the fear in this write, Hugh, and I thank you for stopping in for the quick read and review today! :) :) Find some special time just for you this week -- you deserve it! :) :)
Comment from RodG
The title says it all! You set the scene swiftly in the store with Mom enjoying Robert's antics with his pacifier. And then he's gone! The tragic truth is that this can--and does--happen.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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The title says it all! You set the scene swiftly in the store with Mom enjoying Robert's antics with his pacifier. And then he's gone! The tragic truth is that this can--and does--happen.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Searching for a fearful subject (in only 50 words), I couldn't think of anything more scary than this situation. I'm glad you found the fear in this write, Rod, and I thank you for stopping in for the quick read and review today! :) :) Find some special time just for you this week -- you deserve it! :) :)
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You are very welcome. This shortie got my vote. Rod
Comment from Dawnya
That would definitely make a parent's heart stop cold. I'm glad the character and the inspiration for the character were quick thinkers and able to seal the area. Good fear flash fiction entry.
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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That would definitely make a parent's heart stop cold. I'm glad the character and the inspiration for the character were quick thinkers and able to seal the area. Good fear flash fiction entry.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Searching for a fearful subject (in only 50 words), I couldn't think of anything more scary than this situation. I'm glad you found the fear in this write, Dawnya, and I thank you for stopping in for the quick read and review today! :) :) Find some special time just for you this week -- you deserve it! :) :)
