Comment from poesyapprentice

Excellent

LOL! Nice hook with the beginning. Wonder why no one else has caught on to this little contest secret, hmmm? ; ) Best of luck! This entry has my vote.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018

That's because no one else likes to cut anyone else down on here. I, on the other hand, get my kicks out of it, haha. Thank you for the great review and support, M. I usually have to throw my twisted humor in most dumb stuff I write. I'm fairly certain most people on here know who I am whenever they come across one of my little gems, by now, lol. I'm surprised I get 'any' votes besides my own sometimes. Thank you again, your support got me third place in this one. That's at least enough to enter something dumb in another one, ha. Have a great day.

;)

Ron

reply by poesyapprentice on 03-Oct-2018

They give you votes because your writes are funny lol.
:-) I know you are mostly here for the contests now, so I might have to go dig around in your profile for some of those old poems of yours that were serious works, as I enjoyed those too. Hope you are having a good week.

Comment from LyndaS

Exceptional

This is what you get from a giggle box at 3:00 am. I am expecting some kind of horror but no..... I am reading another kind of horror from the fanstory dark side. Clearly you are the leader. This hook was priceless and I cannot stop giggling. I grant you six stars for making me laugh this vacant night. Hail to you, rebel poet!!!!!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018

Thank you so much for the great review and the big six, Lynda. Yeah, I wanted go a different route than everyone else would take. The sad part is, from how long it's taking to get to the booth, apparently my deepest fear has come true, haha. If everyone counted correctly it would be going to the booth. Now it's going to be held in limbo until it gets fixed. Who knows? I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, L. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great night.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a great 50 word Flash entry!! Your handling of the fear factor was excellent. This reader could sense the humor you built up to with the dreaded 50 word limit. You definitely brought a chuckle. Good job!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018

Thank you for the fantastic review, Sugar. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. From how long it's taking to get to the booth, it looks like my fears may have came true, lol. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Thank you again. Have a great day.

Comment from Bananafish308

Excellent

That's pretty damn funny. I did not expect that. Well done. Good luck with the contest. I hope the others have as much of a sense of humor as I do.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018

Thank you for the great review, BF. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I hope they do too, lol. I'm glad you liked this silly thing. Have a great day.

reply by Bananafish308 on 01-Oct-2018

You're quite welcome.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifty-word flash fiction story, Unfathomable Horror, brings the readers into the gripping story of writers waiting for the literature contest to be judged. Scary.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018

Thank you for the great review, Bill. I appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.