"Miracles"
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "I Never, Ever, Can Say...Goodbye"List of Exceptional Poetry.
7 total reviews
Comment from Lisa Heath
Ricky, this chapter reads really well and I also want to express my condolences on the loss of your child. We lost a grandson at the age of four and one half. Some days I'm over it with sadness and others I'm not. I pray you continue with this book, it's up to you - you may want to lengthen this chapter a little. Lisa
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Ricky, this chapter reads really well and I also want to express my condolences on the loss of your child. We lost a grandson at the age of four and one half. Some days I'm over it with sadness and others I'm not. I pray you continue with this book, it's up to you - you may want to lengthen this chapter a little. Lisa
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Sorry for your lost and my deepest condolences.
My words will heal if you can believe...
Read...
"Production of Human Birth" and thanks...
Doctor Ricky 1024.
The Doctor is in.
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows both the father's grief and the son's feelings about dying. I Iike the mix.
I found a couple of errors In the first stanza it should be I fell my body being moved. In the third it should be coffin's lid. In the second to last stanza it should ge
Today, it's been.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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This shows both the father's grief and the son's feelings about dying. I Iike the mix.
I found a couple of errors In the first stanza it should be I fell my body being moved. In the third it should be coffin's lid. In the second to last stanza it should ge
Today, it's been.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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Thanks and consideration for the corrections.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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You're welcome. We all need corrections at some times.
Joan
Comment from Tina Crute
Wow...this is deeply touching and wonderful and sad all at the same time. Extrememly well written. I think you will affect many hearts with this one. The emotion created by your words is magic. Its genius.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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Wow...this is deeply touching and wonderful and sad all at the same time. Extrememly well written. I think you will affect many hearts with this one. The emotion created by your words is magic. Its genius.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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Thanks Tina.
This was a pleasure to create as it is to review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a very emotional read and also a well-written account of love and loss. Your words are very heartwrenching. The dialogue is very effective in sharing your feelings of pain and grief.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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What a very emotional read and also a well-written account of love and loss. Your words are very heartwrenching. The dialogue is very effective in sharing your feelings of pain and grief.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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Thanks Cindy
This was a pleasure to
Create for you.
Doctor Ricky...
Comment from chrissy8
From the bottom of my heart I am sorry for your loss but I am glad his organs kept others alive! Your poem was awesome and inspiring! The music will never stop. It will always keep playing in your heart and mind. Thank you for sharing your sons story!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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From the bottom of my heart I am sorry for your loss but I am glad his organs kept others alive! Your poem was awesome and inspiring! The music will never stop. It will always keep playing in your heart and mind. Thank you for sharing your sons story!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Thanks Chrissy for your time and consideration.
Ricky
Comment from ciliverde
Written by father and son, and then reading your poem, I realize how very sweet those words are. I'm kind of speechless to be honest, Ricky - and I am humbled to read your words, especially about the coffin lid opening.
as The Night Sky bekons (beckons) me, I await My Destiny and Fate.
It today, has been over days? - I am not sure what you mean to say here.
My very best wishes to you and your family,
Carol
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Written by father and son, and then reading your poem, I realize how very sweet those words are. I'm kind of speechless to be honest, Ricky - and I am humbled to read your words, especially about the coffin lid opening.
as The Night Sky bekons (beckons) me, I await My Destiny and Fate.
It today, has been over days? - I am not sure what you mean to say here.
My very best wishes to you and your family,
Carol
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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The answer (only Upon Request)
Is over 5,600 days since the March 2003 Accident.
Doctor Ricky 1024.
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Thank you, hugs, Carol.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very sorrowful yet moving write about a son that has passed on and a father that, by the chosen title, can never say goodbye. Thank you, Doc, for sharing this piece of your heart with us! :) :)
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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A very sorrowful yet moving write about a son that has passed on and a father that, by the chosen title, can never say goodbye. Thank you, Doc, for sharing this piece of your heart with us! :) :)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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It's always nice to hear from you.
In communication with Jason, youfiet needs Connection.
Then you need Faih that the operator up there...
(God)
Is listening.
Doctor Ricky 1024.