From Heaven
Contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from Kelly Hanna
A hard piece to witness. I feel for both the parent and child. We all can assume how often this must happen. A child without their mother. Asking if she can see or hear us. Good presentation as well. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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A hard piece to witness. I feel for both the parent and child. We all can assume how often this must happen. A child without their mother. Asking if she can see or hear us. Good presentation as well. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Kelly. Thankfully this isn't factual. Yes, it would have to be hard for a child who loses a parent.. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from jenintorre
This is such a heartbreaking 5-7-5 poem. it really brought tears to my eyes as it is so sad.
It is very well written and a good entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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This is such a heartbreaking 5-7-5 poem. it really brought tears to my eyes as it is so sad.
It is very well written and a good entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review, Jen. I'm glad you liked this sad little piece. Thankfully it isn't true for me. I'm sure it is for many though. I really appreciate the gracious stars. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from RodG
And the reader nearly weeps too by the time he's finished reading your last line. The contrast of a beautiful star-filled sky and the sad query of a child is almost overwhelming. Superbly done in 17 syllables. Rod
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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And the reader nearly weeps too by the time he's finished reading your last line. The contrast of a beautiful star-filled sky and the sad query of a child is almost overwhelming. Superbly done in 17 syllables. Rod
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review, Rod. Thankfully this isn't factual. Just the idea I came up with for the contest. I really appreciate the generous stars, R. Thank you again. Have a great weekend.
