From Heaven
Contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Aw...what a heartwrenching poem but a well-written and beautifully formatted 5-7-5 poem about the stars and the sky. This is a perfect contest entry. I have a feeling you will do well!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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Aw...what a heartwrenching poem but a well-written and beautifully formatted 5-7-5 poem about the stars and the sky. This is a perfect contest entry. I have a feeling you will do well!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review, Cindy. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this sad little piece.
Comment from LyndaS
Wow! Way to pull the strings on everyone's heart. This packs a truckload of emotion in only seventeen syllables. I love the art work here. This is a great entry into this contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Wow! Way to pull the strings on everyone's heart. This packs a truckload of emotion in only seventeen syllables. I love the art work here. This is a great entry into this contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Lynda. The artwork was actually a picture of them standing in a sunset but used an art program to make it look like they were under the night sky. Impressive, huh? Lol. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from Debbie Pope
My, that is good. Such an honest mistake. Children see their own visions in the heavens. As a child, I thought that sunbeams from clouds were Jesus on his way. I suppose it has to do with the imagery that poets have created over the years.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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My, that is good. Such an honest mistake. Children see their own visions in the heavens. As a child, I thought that sunbeams from clouds were Jesus on his way. I suppose it has to do with the imagery that poets have created over the years.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Debbie. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Awe, this is beautiful, so sad, so sweet. The questions of a child always seem to sometimes overwhelm and amaze us with their honesty and innocence. I like everything about this. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Awe, this is beautiful, so sad, so sweet. The questions of a child always seem to sometimes overwhelm and amaze us with their honesty and innocence. I like everything about this. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jeffrey. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from poesyapprentice
Oh my goodness! I don't know if the voting has started for this because I've been off for a bit, but there's lots of emotion in this short little write (with perfect syllable count) which I am sure will pull some heartstrings of the voters! Best of luck! Hope you are back to driving by now, too!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Oh my goodness! I don't know if the voting has started for this because I've been off for a bit, but there's lots of emotion in this short little write (with perfect syllable count) which I am sure will pull some heartstrings of the voters! Best of luck! Hope you are back to driving by now, too!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the fantastic review, M. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. It's actually in the booth now. This is the idea I came up with when I was thinking about stars and sky, how people always point up when telling kids about Heaven. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again.
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I tied you up for first, but there is still time so not sure how it will end. best of luck!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the night sky filled with stars that reminds children about their beloved mommy that is not with them anymore but somewhere between the million stars.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the night sky filled with stars that reminds children about their beloved mommy that is not with them anymore but somewhere between the million stars.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Sally Law
I am sorry I don't have a six for you. This is so sweet and precious. Your artwork completed your fine poetry. I hope you win the contest. You have my vote!
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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I am sorry I don't have a six for you. This is so sweet and precious. Your artwork completed your fine poetry. I hope you win the contest. You have my vote!
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big six offer, Sally. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Thank you again.
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You?re welcome! :+)
Comment from Kelly Grim
So good! So sweet! and so heart wrenching! Can't imagine the scenario or the pain a child must feel missing a parent who has passed... ugh. Very beautiful! Wonderful contest entry!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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So good! So sweet! and so heart wrenching! Can't imagine the scenario or the pain a child must feel missing a parent who has passed... ugh. Very beautiful! Wonderful contest entry!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review, Kelly. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and emotional 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the Stars and Sky prompt. You used very good descriptive and emotional words and very lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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This is a very well written and emotional 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the Stars and Sky prompt. You used very good descriptive and emotional words and very lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Teri. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These words are heart-breaking and this is such a poignant write, so few words and yet the tears fall in strangers when reading them, this poem is very powerful, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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These words are heart-breaking and this is such a poignant write, so few words and yet the tears fall in strangers when reading them, this poem is very powerful, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review, Dolly. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
