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Comment from mermaids
I love the last two verses, you add a twist to an ancient tale here. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic form. I like the two line verses and this is a fun poem to read.
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I love the last two verses, you add a twist to an ancient tale here. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic form. I like the two line verses and this is a fun poem to read.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from Kelly Hanna
A clever and short piece. It did make me smile to see Gorgeous George run off as Dad came. An enjoyable poem. Good presentation and rhyming. Nice work.
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A clever and short piece. It did make me smile to see Gorgeous George run off as Dad came. An enjoyable poem. Good presentation and rhyming. Nice work.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018